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Ab tere mere beech zara fasla bi ho
Hum log jab milein to koi doosra bi ho

Tu janta nahin meri chahat ajeeb hai
Mujh ko mana raha hai kabi khud khafa bi ho

Tu bewafa nahin hai magar bewafahi kar
Uss ki nazar mein rehney ka kuch silsala bi ho

Pat jharr ke tootey huwey paton ke saath saath
Mausam kabi to badley ga yeh aasra bi ho

Chup chap uss ko beth ke dekhoon tamam raat
Jaga huwa bi ho koi sohia huwa bi ho

Uss ke liye to main ney yahan tak duaaein kien
Meri tarah se koi ussey chahata bi ho

Nice :clapping

Bashir Badar, hmm sahi , mein bhi unn ka kuch likha hua share kerti hoon..


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Asslaam-o-Alaikum,

Many many thanks for appreciation.

Slaam!

Bohat achha kia "Bashir Badar" ko shrooh ker k, aur dono dostoon ka intekhab bhi bhi bohat umda hai.

Allah hafiz

<!--QuoteBegin-Mirzaec 18 2003, 09:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Mirza @ Dec 18 2003, 09:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Slaam!

Bohat achha kia "Bashir Badar" ko shrooh ker k, aur dono dostoon ka intekhab bhi bhi bohat umda hai.

Allah hafiz [/b][/quote]
agar talaash karoon koi mil hi jaiay ga
magar tumhari tarah kaun mujhe chahe ga


tumhein zaroor koi chaahaton se dekhe ga
magar vo ankhein hamaari kahan se laaye ga


naa jaane kab tere dil par nai si dastak ho
makaan Khalii hua hai to koi aaye ga


main apni raah mein divaar ban ke baitha hoon
agar vo aaya to kis raaste se aaye ga


tumhaare saath ye mausam farishton jaisa hai
tumhaare baad ye mausam bohut sataaye ga

Slaam


Mujhay kuchh ziada nahi pata. koi doast plz advice keray k kis tarha text ka texture (color, font etc) change ho sakta hai, aur dosary jpg image kaisay yahan paste hota hai. mashkoor hoon ga

Allah hafiz

<!--QuoteBegin-Bari jaanec 17 2003, 11:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Bari jaan @ Dec 17 2003, 11:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Ab tere mere beech zara fasla bi ho
Hum log jab milein to koi doosra bi ho

Tu janta nahin meri chahat ajeeb hai
Mujh ko mana raha hai kabi khud khafa bi ho

Tu bewafa nahin hai magar bewafahi kar
Uss ki nazar mein rehney ka kuch silsala bi ho

Pat jharr ke tootey huwey paton ke saath saath
Mausam kabi to badley ga yeh aasra bi ho

Chup chap uss ko beth ke dekhoon tamam raat
Jaga huwa bi ho koi sohia huwa bi ho

Uss ke liye to main ney yahan tak duaaein kien
Meri tarah se koi ussey chahata bi ho [/b][/quote]
zabardast! /luv

<!--QuoteBegin-Bari jaanec 17 2003, 07:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Bari jaan @ Dec 17 2003, 07:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Ab tere mere beech zara fasla bi ho
Hum log jab milein to koi doosra bi ho

Tu janta nahin meri chahat ajeeb hai
Mujh ko mana raha hai kabi khud khafa bi ho

Tu bewafa nahin hai magar bewafahi kar
Uss ki nazar mein rehney ka kuch silsala bi ho

Pat jharr ke tootey huwey paton ke saath saath
Mausam kabi to badley ga yeh aasra bi ho

Chup chap uss ko beth ke dekhoon tamam raat
Jaga huwa bi ho koi sohia huwa bi ho

Uss ke liye to main ney yahan tak duaaein kien
Meri tarah se koi ussey chahata bi ho [/b][/quote]
/rose /rose