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koi phool dhoop ki pattiyon me hare ribon se bandha hua
woh ghazal ka lahja naya naya na kaha hua na suna hua

jise le gayi hai abhi hawa woh waraq tha dil ki kitab ka
kahin aanso'on se mita hua kahin aaso'on se likha hua

kai meel ret ko kaat ker koi mauj phool khila gayi
koi ped pyas se mar raha hai nadi ke paas khada hua

wohi khat ke jin pe jagah jagah do mahakte hoton ke chand the
kisi bhole bisre se taaq pe tah-e-gard hoga daba hua

mujhe haadson ne saja saja ke bahot haseen bana diya
mera dil bhi jaise dulhan ka hath ho menhdiyon se racha hua

wohi shahr hai wohi raaste wohi ghar hai aur wohi lawn bhi
magar is dareeche se poochna woh darakht anaar ka kya hua

mere saath jugnu hain humsafar magar is sharar ki bisat kya
yeh chiraagh koi chiraagh hai na jala hua na bujha hua

Kabi din ki dhoop mein jhoom ke kabi shab ke phool ko choom ke
Yunhi saath saath chalein sada kabi khatam apna safar na ho

Mere saath mere habib aa zara dil ke aur qareeb aa
Tujhey dharrkano mein utar loon k bicharrney ka koi dar na ho

<!--QuoteBegin-NainTaraec 17 2003, 11:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (NainTara @ Dec 17 2003, 11:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Bashir Badar, hmm sahi , mein bhi unn ka kuch likha hua share kerti hoon..


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zabardast!
buhtu acha intiKhaab
KHush rahaye (f)

/aoa



sar jhukaao gey to paththar devta ho jaayega
itna mat chaho usey woh bewafa ho jaayega

ham bhi darya hain hamein apna hunar maloom hai
jis taraf bhi chal parein gey raasta ho jaayega


Allah hafiz

/aoa


bari khoobsoorat contributions aayi hein..infact main ney inhein itna parha nahin bas ikka dukka hi parheen theen...and now here I'll definitely get more chance to read him...
Bohut umdaa shairi hai...

Allah hafiz

/aoa


yeh kasak dil ki dil mein chubhi reh gayi
zindagi mein tumhari kami reh gayi

aik main, aik tum, aik deewar thi
zindagi aadhi aadhi bati reh gayi

raat ko bheegi bheegi chhaton ki tarah
meri palkon pey thori nami reh gayi

main ney roka nahi woh chala bhi gaya
baybasi door tak daikhti reh gayi

merey ghar ki taraf dhoop ki peeth thi
aatey aatey idhar chandni reh gayi


Allah hafiz

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abhi is taraf na nigah ker, maiN Ghazal ki palkaiN saNwaar looN
mera lafz lafz ho aayena, tujhay ainay meiN utaar looN

maiN tamaam din ka thaka hua, tu tmaam shab ka jga hua
zara Teher ja isi mooR per, teray saath shaam guzaar looN

agar aasmaaN ki numaishooN meiN, mujhay bhi izn-e-qyaam ho
to maiN motiuN ki dukaan say, teree baaliaN, teray haar looN

kaye ajnabi teree raah maiN, meray paas say yoooN guzar gaye
jinhaiN daikh ker ye taRap hoye, tera naam lay kay pukaar looN

ye hawa na jaanay kahaaN kahaaN bharee dhoop meiN liyea phiray
meray barg-e-dil zara Teher ja, tujhay aaNsooN meiN saNwaar looN
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waaaah !!!! Nabeel ... buhat khubsuret intekhaab hai ... main ne klabhi yeh ghazal nahi perhi thi

aur Nain ... tum ne ju share ki hai na wuh tao aafut hai