Urdu Poetry Forum

**Mayyaa** · #1 05-05-2008, 06:25 AM

Rukhsat howa to baat meri maan kar gaya!!!

Rukhsat howa to baat meri maan kar gaya
jo uss ke paas tha sab mujhay daan kar gaya

bichhra kuchh iss adaa se ke rutt hi badal gayi
ekk shakhs saare shehar ko veeran kargaya

dilchasp waqeya hai kal ekk azeez dost
apne mufaad par mujhay qurbaan kargaya

ab shehar bharr main koi bhi pehchanta nahi
woh appne saath mujh ko bhi anjaan kargaya

muskan butt · #2 05-05-2008, 07:07 AM

Bahut khoob shaheen jee............

**aryan** · #3 05-05-2008, 07:22 AM

<marquee behavior=alternate direction left>Rukhsat howa to baat meri maan kar gaya
jo uss ke paas tha sab mujhay daan kar gaya </marquee>

<marquee behavior=alternate>bichhra kuchh iss adaa se ke rutt hi badal gayi
ekk shakhs saare shehar ko veeran kargaya </marquee>

<marquee behavior=alternate direction=right>ab shehar bharr main koi bhi pehchanta nahi
woh appne saath mujh ko bhi anjaan kargaya </marquee>

bahut khooob Shaheen ji nice sharing

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**Mayyaa** · #4 05-05-2008, 08:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aryan

<MARQUEE behavior=alternate left>Rukhsat howa to baat meri maan kar gaya
jo uss ke paas tha sab mujhay daan kar gaya
</MARQUEE>

<MARQUEE behavior=alternate>bichhra kuchh iss adaa se ke rutt hi badal gayi
ekk shakhs saare shehar ko veeran kargaya
</MARQUEE>

<MARQUEE direction=right behavior=alternate>ab shehar bharr main koi bhi pehchanta nahi
woh appne saath mujh ko bhi anjaan kargaya
</MARQUEE>

bahut khooob Shaheen ji nice sharing

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Aryan jee gazal psand karny ka bahut shukria aor es baat ka b k aap gazal sirf read hi nai karty poetry k aik aik lafaz ko samjty b ho khuda aap ko khush rkhy......

**aryan** · #5 05-05-2008, 08:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by m.shaheen

Aryan jee gazal psand karny ka bahut shukria aor es baat ka b k aap gazal sirf read hi nai karty poetry k aik aik lafaz ko samjty b ho khuda aap ko khush rkhy......

aap to humko sharminda kar rahi hain shaheen hum is layaq kahan hain ki lafzon ko samajh saken

lafzon se khelna to aap jaise poet ka kaam hai

**Mayyaa** · #6 05-05-2008, 08:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aryan

aap to humko sharminda kar rahi hain shaheen hum is layaq kahan hain ki lafzon ko samajh saken

lafzon se khelna to aap jaise poet ka kaam hai

THANX Again Aryan jee aap bilkul shirminda na ho pharny waly k zhoq per hota hai k likhny waly ki baat ko samj saky aap sab ki dua ho tou zroor likhty rhy gay.aryan jee kia baat hai ajkal aap b poet ban gay. ya bana diy gay.......

**aryan** · #7 05-05-2008, 09:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by m.shaheen

THANX Again Aryan jee aap bilkul shirminda na ho pharny waly k zhoq per hota hai k likhny waly ki baat ko samj saky aap sab ki dua ho tou zroor likhty rhy gay.aryan jee kia baat hai ajkal aap b poet ban gay. ya bana diy gay.......

main pahle se hi likhta tha lekin beech mein kuchh arse ke liye likhna band kar diya tha, ab phir se likhna start kar raha hoon

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jaisa bhi ho sakta hai ek kahawat suni hogi aapne

kahin ka eent kahin ka roda
bhanumati ne kunba joda

kuchh aisa hi hai kahin na kahin se bana hi lete hain kuchh na kuchh.

**aqeel160** · #8 05-05-2008, 10:47 AM

Very Nice.............

But If U Want Talk To Other One, I Think U Should Send Him/her Private Message............. .....

Dont Mind It.................. ......

**Mayyaa** · #9 05-05-2008, 02:25 PM

thanx 2much and thanx 4advoic............

**khan_khan9116** · #10 05-05-2008, 03:24 PM

khoob............... ...

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