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Kabhi saya hai kabhi dhoop muqaddar mera

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Old 10-27-2006, 03:23 PM
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Kabhi saya hai kabhi dhoop muqaddar mera


kabhi saya hai kabhi dhoop muqaddar mera

hota rehta hai yunhi qarz barabar mera

toot jate hain kabhi mere kinare mujh main

doob jata hai kabhi mujh main samandar mera

kisi sehra main bichhad jaenge sab yaar mere

kisi jungle main bhatak jaega lashker mera

baawafa tha to mujhe poochhne wale bhi na the-y

bewafaa hun to hua naam bhi ghar ghar mera

kitne hanste hue mausam abhi aate lekin

aik hi dhoop ne kumhla diya manzar mera

aakhri jur-e per kaif ho shayad baqi

ab jo chhalka to chhalak jaega saaghar mera





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very nice..

toot jate hain kabhi mere kinare mujh main

doob jata hai kabhi mujh main samandar mera


yeh sher to hasil-e-ghazal hai

keep sharing
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Salaammmm

wah wah wah wah wah

buhat hi aalaa

buhat hi khub
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toot jate hain kabhi mere kinare mujh main

doob jata hai kabhi mujh main samandar mera

wahhhh wahh.....

kya kehnay janab

bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal ka intakhaab hai noor-al-sabah aap ka

yoon hi apna intakhaab share kerti raha karain..

thanks for sharing
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toot jate hain kabhi mere kinare mujh main

doob jata hai kabhi mujh main samandar mera

bohat umdah laga aap ka intikhab... mazeed share kerti rahiye mile
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Baraey naam sahi koi meherbaan to hai

hamare sar pe bhi hone ko aasman to hai

yeh aur baat ke woh ab yahan nahin rehta

magar yeh uska basaya hua makan to hai

alawa iske na kuchh aur parda rakh mujhse

faseel-e jism mere tere darmiyan to hai

bichhar ke zinda nahin rehsakenge hum donon

mujhe yeh wahm to hai unko yeh gumaan to hai

saron pe sayafagan abr-e aarzoo na sahi

hamare paas sarabon a saibaan to hai

gul-e murad nahin sang haey tifl sahi

ghareeb-e sheher ka akhir kisi ko dhyan to hai
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Old 10-28-2006, 09:56 AM
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Buhat Khoob Dear
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Salamz
Very Nice .....
Ta Ta
A.Hafiz
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