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Ghazal Competition For August 2008

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Old 08-03-2008, 03:57 AM
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Assalam-o-Alaikum Friends


Kaisey hai aap sab, mujhey umeed hai k aap sab khairiyat se hongey. Aaj se August K maheeney K liye Ghazal Competition start ho raha hai. Mujhey umeed hai K aap sab members iss mein pichli baar ki tharah bar poor hissa lein gey.

Mujhey ma'zrat k saath kehna parr raha hai k database crash hone ki waja se yeh thread delete ho gaya tha, so jin members ne Ghazals share ki thi, un ko dobaara se share karni parrein gi. I am sorry for that.

Yeh muqaabla one week K liye rahe ga yani 10 August thak,aur uss k baad poll laga diya jaaye ga.

Rules mein koi changes nahi hue lekin pir bhi batha detha hoon.
  • Har member ko AIK hi ghazal share karni hai.
  • Woh Ghazal kisi doosrey member ne share na ki ho.
  • Ghazal hi post karei, khayaal rahe k woh NAZAM na ho.
  • Ghazal k ilaawa posts delete kar di jaayei gi so gup shup na karein iss thread mein.
Good Luck to everyone.

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Ab teri yaad say wehshat naheen hoti mujh ko
Zakham khulney se aziyat naheen hoti mujh ko

Ab koi aaye chala jaye main khush rehta hoon
Ab kisi shakhs ki aadat naheen hoti mujh ko

Aesa badla hoon teray sheher ka paani pi kar
Jhoot boloon to nidaamat naheen hoti mujh ko

Main ne bhi ki hey mohabbat, so kisi ki khatir
Koi marta hai to hairat naheen hoti mujh ko

Itna masroof hoon jeenay ki hawas main yaaro
Saans leney ki bhi fursat naheen hoti mujh ko
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"NA LIKHNA"


khat likhna aur khat k nechay naam na likhna
dil likhna aur dil koi peghaam na likhna

khoob adaa hai yeh taqdeer k katib ki
ehal e wafa ki kismat mein araam na likhna

likhnay walo! shouq se likhna piyar k qissay
lekin inn afsaano ka anjaam na likhna

inn ki kismat mein hai hansna aur hansana
inn phoolon k liye khazaan ki shaam na likhna

kal uss ne paighaam yeh mujh ko bhaija tha
geet tow likhna inn mein mera naam na likhna

NASIR! husn ko lafzoon se majrooh na karna
zulfoon ko barsaat, laboon ko jaam na likhna

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لطف وہ عشق میں پائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے
رنج بھی ایسے اٹھائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

انہی قدموں نے تمھارے انہی قدموں کی قسم
خاک میں اتنی ملائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

جو زمانے کے ستم ھیں ، وہ زمانہ جانے
تو نے دل اتنے ستائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

مسکراتے ھوئے وہ مجمعء اغیار کے ساتھ
آج یوں بزم میں آئے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

سادگی، بانکپن، اغماض، شرارت، شوخی
تو نے انداز وہ پائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

کعبہ و دیر میں پتھرا گئیں دونوں آنکھیں
اس قدر اپنے پرائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے

داغ_وارفتہ کو ھم آج تیرے کوچے سے
اس طرح کھینچ کے لائے ھیں کہ جی جانتا ھے
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zaKhm-e-tanhaa_ii me.n Khushbuu-e-hinaa kisakii thii
saayaa diivaar pe meraa thaa sadaa kisakii thii


uskii raftaar se lipaTii rahii merii aa.Nkhe.n
us ne mu.D kar bhii na dekhaa ki vafaa kis kii thii

vaqt kii tarah dabe paa.Nv ye kaun aayaa hai
mai.n a.Ndheraa jise samajhaa vo qabaa kis kii thii

aa.Nsuo.n se hii sahii bhar gayaa daaman meraa
haath to mai.n ne uThaaye the duaa kisakii thii


merii aaho.n kii zabaa.n koii samajhataa kaise
zindagii itanii dukhii mere sivaa kisakii thii



aag se dostii us kii thii jalaa ghar meraa
dii ga_ii kis ko sazaa aur Khataa kisakii thii

mai.n ne biinaa_iyaa.N bo kar bhii a.ndhere kaaTe
kis ke bas me.n thii zamii.n abr-o-havaa kis kii thii
chho.D dii kis liye tuu ne "Muzaffar" duniyaa
justjuu sii tujhe har vaqt bataa kisakii thii
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Mansoob thay jo laug meri zindagi k sath
Aksar wohi milay hain barri bay rukhi k sath
.
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Yun tau main hans parra hoon tumharay liye magar
Kitnay sitaray toot parray hain ik hansi k sath
.
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Fursat milay tau apna girebaan bhi dekh lay
Aey dost yun na khel meri bay bassi k sath
.
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Majbooriyon ki baat chali tau maey kahan
Hum ne piya hai zehar bhi aksar khushi k sath
.
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Chehray badal badal k mujhe mil rahay hain laug
Itna bura sulook meri saadgi k sath?
.
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Ik sajda-e-khuloos ki qeemat fizaa-e-khild
Ya rab mazaq na kar meri bandagi k sath
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MOHSIN karam ki laey bhi ho jiss mein khuloos bhi
Mujh ko ghazab ka piyar hai us dushmani k sath.......!!!
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kis kis ko batayen ge judaa’ii ka sabab ham


Ranjish hii sahii dil hii dukhaane ke liye aa
Aa phir se mujhe chhoR ke jaane ke liye aa
*
Pahle se maraasim na sahii phir bhii kabhii tau
Rasm-o-rahe duniyaa hii niibhaane ke liye aa
*
Kis kis ko bataayeNge judaa’ii kaa sabab ham
Tuu mujh se Khafaa hai to zamaane ke liye aa
*
Kuchh to mere pindaar-e-muhabbat ka bharam rakh
Tuu bhii to kabhii mujh ko manaane ke liye aa
*
Ek umr se huuN lazzat-e-giriyaa se bhii mahruum
Ai raahat-e-jaaN mujh ko rulaane ke liye aa
*
Ab tak dil-e-Khush-feh’m ko tujh se haiN ummiideN
Ye aaKhrii shammeN bhii bujhaane ke liye aa
*
Ranjish hii sahii dil hii dukhaane ke liye aa
Aa phir se mujhe chhoR ke jaane ke liye aa
*
Pehle se maraasim na sahii phir bhii kabhii tau
Rasm-o-rahe duniyaa hii niibhaane ke liye aa
*
Kis kis ko bataayeNge judaa’ii kaa sabab ham
Tuu mujh se Khafaa hai to zamaane ke liye aa
*
Kuchh to mere pindaar-e-muhabbat ka bharam rakh
Tuu bhii to kabhii mujh ko manaane ke liye aa
*
Ek umr se huuN lazzat-e-giriyaa se bhii mahruum
Ai raahat-e-jaaN mujh ko rulaane ke liye aa
*
Ab tak dil-e-Khush-feh’m ko tujh se haiN ummiideN
Ye aaKhrii shammeN bhii bujhaane ke liye aa
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Apne Hisse mein tu bas Itnii Zahanat rekh Lii
Dhoop mein baith gye baruff Amanat rekh Lii

Rasta bhool gye hain tu taejjub kaiisa
Ghar Se nikle tu irradon mein khayant rekh Lii

Faisala Jab kissi Zalim ke karrum Per Thehra
Jisim tu de diyya sansoon ki amant rekh Lii

Hakkam-e-Waqt Riayya ke lye Ibbrat Haii
TaaJ rekha Haii Sar per Koi Laenat rekh Lii

Uss Ke Jo Teer khatta The wo aiise Lottay
Doshmanii mein bhi Zafar hum ne amanat rekh Lii
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