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This is a discussion on Ghazal Competition within the Ghazal forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Assalam-o-Alaikum Friends Mujhey Umeed hai aap sab teek hongey. Mein ne socha k aap sab ithni achi achi sharing karthey ...
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#1
06-22-2008, 03:33 AM
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Assalam-o-Alaikum Friends Mujhey Umeed hai aap sab teek hongey. Mein ne socha k aap sab ithni achi achi sharing karthey hai Q na aisi hi achi sharings ka aik compitition karwaaya jaaye. Mujhey umeed hai k aap sab log participate karengey. 1.gif ")1") Acha tho aap sab logo ko karna yeh hai k sab ko aik aik ghazal share karni hai. Aur dihaan rahe k woh ghazal kisi doosrey member ne share na ki ho. Yeh compitition 5 din thak rahe ga yani Thursady thak. Us k baad poll laga diya jaaye ga and voting k baad winner ka naam batha diya jaaye ga. Tho aap ki participation ka inthizar rahe ga. Waisey tho mein ne bohut clear baat ki hai lekin agar pir bhi kisi ko samaj na aaye tho dobaara pooch sakthey hai.
__________________ Ham Un Se Hat K Chalthey Hai Jo Rasthey Aam Ho Jaayein.                   |
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#2
06-22-2008, 04:43 AM
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Kabhi deewar kabhi dar ki taraf jatey hain Saarey rastey he tere ghar ki taraf jatey hain Ek janun hai jo mujhy Dasht mein lay jata hai Warna Piyasey toh samandar ki taraf jatey hain Koi toh hai pass e deewar chaman jis k liye Zaviye nazroon k manzar ki taraf jatey hain Ous say takraye toh ho jain gaey reiza reiza Aaeiney kis liye Pathar ki taraf jatey hain Zoor e bazoo say baana saktey hain TaQdeer jo log Janey Kiun Qaid e MuQadar ki taraf jatey hain NAAZ ik sajhdey ki Khuwahish hai jo lay jati hai Warna kab ous butt e Kafir ki taraf jatey hain (ShoQat Ali NAAZ)
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#3
06-22-2008, 09:23 AM
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Lab Pay Aahein Aankh Mein Aisa Woh Paani Dey Gaya Kya Ussey Dohraein Hum Kaisi Kahani Dey Gaya Zindagi Dhalney Ko Thi, Aisa Kiya Uss Ne Sahar Aisi Qurbat Di Mujhey Phir Say Jawani Dey Gaya Be-khabar Tha, Dard Ka Unwaan Baney Gi Zindagi Jee Nahin Saktey Woh Aisi Zindagani Dey Gaya Sab Ko Haathon Say Diya Mehfil Mein Aaney Ka Payam Kachey Kachey Mann Mujhey Dawat Zabani Dey Gaya Kuch Nahin Chorra Hai Uss Ne Pyar Ki Iss Raah Par Murr Ke Phir Bhi Daikhney Ki Aadat Purani Dey Gaya Kis Qadar Aabad Tha 'Majrooh' Ke Dil Ka Nagar Basti-e-Chaahat Ko Zaalim Phir Weerani Dey Gaya...!
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#4
06-22-2008, 12:19 PM
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Wo Ada-e-dilbari Ho K Nawa-e-Aashiqana Jo Dilon Ko Fatah Kar Le Wohi Faatahe Zamana Ye Tera Jamal-e-Kamil, Ye Shabab Ka Zamana Dil-e-Dushmanan Salamat, Dil-e-Dostan Nishana Ye Falak Ye Mah-o-Anjum, Ye Zameen Ye Zamana Tere Husan Ki Hakayat Mere Ishaq Ka Fasana Ye He Ishaq Ki Karamat, Ye Kamal-e-Shairana Abhi Munh Se Bat Nikli Abhi Ho Gai Fasana Ye Aleel C Fazaen, Ye Mareez Sa Zamana Teri Pak Tar Jawani, Tera Husan Mojzana Tujhe Hadast-e-Paiham Se B Kya Mile Ga Nadan Tera Dil Agar Ho Zinda To Nafas B Tazyana Teri Ik Namood Se He Tere Ik Hijab Tak He Meri Fikar-e-Arash paima, Mera Naz-e-Shairana Kahhi Husan Ki Tabiyat Na Badl Saka Zamana Wohi Naz-e-Be Nayazi,Wohi Shan-e-Khusarwana Mujhe Ishaq Ki Sadaqat Pe B Shak Sa Ho Chala He Mere Dil Se Keh Gai Kya Wo Nigah-e-Naqdana Main Hoon Is Muqam Par Ab K Faraq-o-Wasal Kese Mera Ishaq b Kahani, tera Husan B Fasana Meri Zindgi To Guzari Tere Hijar K Sahare Meri Maot Ko B Pyare Koi Chahiye Bahana Tere Ishaq Ki Karamat Ye Agar Nahi To Kya He Kabhi Be Adab Na Guzra Mere Pas Se Zamana Teri Doori-o-Hazoori Ka He Ajeeb Aalam Abhi Zindgi Haqeeqat, Abhi Zindgi Fasana Mere Hum Safeer Bulbul Mera Tera Sath Hee Kya Main Zameer-e-Dashat-o-Darya Tu Aseer-e-Aashyana Main Wo Saf Hee Na Keh Doon Jo He Faraq Mujh Main Tujh Main Tera Dard Dard-e-Tanha, Mera gham Gham-e- Zamana Tere Dil K Tootne Par He Kisi Ko Naz Kya Kya Tujhe A Jigar Mubarak Ye Shakasat-e-Faatehana {Poet: Jigar Murad Abadi} HaDi ImAm  |
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#5
06-22-2008, 01:48 PM
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na Gubaar me.n na gulaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa mere dard kii aab-o-tab me.n mujhe dekhanaa kisii vaqt shaam malaal me.n mujhe sochanaa kabhii apane dil kii kitaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa kisii dhun me.n tum bhii jo bastiyo.n ko tyaag do isii rah-e-Khaanaa_Kharaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa kisii raat maah-o-najuum se mujhe puuchhanaa kabhii apanii chashm pur_aab me.n mujhe dekhanaa isii dil se ho kar guzar gaye ka_ii kaaravaa.N kii hijrato.n ke zaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa mai.n na mil sakuu.N bhii to kyaa huaa ke fasaanaa huu.N na_ii daastaa.N naye baab me.n mujhe dekhanaa mere Khaar Khaar savaal me.n mujhe Dhuu.NDhanaa mere giit me.n mere Khvaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa mere aa.Nsuo.n ne bujhaa_ii thii merii tashnagii isii barg_ziidaa sahaab me.n mujhe dekhanaaa vahii ik lamhaa diid thaa ke rukaa rahaa mere roz-o-shab ke hisaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa jo ta.Dap tujhe kisii aa_iine me.n na mil sake to phir aa_iine ke javaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa
__________________ kon kehta hy k aadmi apni kismat khud likhta hy agar yeh sach hy tu kismat mein dard kon likta hy Last edited by silent atitude; 06-22-2008 at 01:55 PM.. |
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#6
06-22-2008, 09:38 PM
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Jub karam hadd-e-tawazan se gozar jata hai izatt-e-nafs ko majroh bhe kar jata hai dum tu lenay do ab itni bhe enayat na karo aadmi baar-e-enayat se bhe mar jata hai daag-e-be'mehri yaran nahi dil se jata yaad reh jati hai toufaan gozar jata hai shouq main eak sa rehta nahi dil ka aalam wqt k saath ye dariya bhe utar jata hai baat ka tanz ajab zakhm hai bharta he nahi warna har zakhm ki ek umar hai bhar jata hai fitna gardish-e-douran nahi rehta daa'em wqt ka kaam gozarna hai gozar jata hai sehra sehra liye pherta hai dil-e-khaak shuda reza reza sar-e-khashaak bikhar jata hai Bazm takhreeb main posheda hai raaz-e-tameer choot lagti hai tu dil aur sanwar jata hai Bazm Ansari |
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#7
06-23-2008, 01:16 AM
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Yeh zara zara si baat par tarha tarha ke azaab kyun... Jo kisi se bhi khafa na ho, mujhe uss khuda ki talaash hai... Mujhe laghzishon pe harr ghari koi tok-ta hai baar baar... Jisey kar ke dil ko dukh na ho, mujhe uss gunaah ki talaash hai... Main dhoondti hoon woh khizaan jisey gulshanon se pyaar ho... Jisey kisi charaagh se na bair ho, mujhe uss hawaa ki talaash hai... Yahan ik lamhey ke parraao mein mere saare phool jhulas gaye... Ab jahan talkhiyon ki tapish na ho, mujhe uss fiza ki talaash hai... Bina humsafar ke kab talak koi musafiton mein laga rahe... Jahan koi kisi se juda na ho, mujhe uss raah ki talaash hai... Mujhe dekh kar jo ik nazar mere saare dard samajh sakey... Jo iss Qadar ho chara-gar, mujhe uss nigaah ki talaash hai... Mohabbaton se jaane kyun yaqeen ab to uth sa chala hai... Wafa bhi khaye kasam jiski, mujhe us wafa ki talaash hai.....!!!!
__________________ Mein Apne Haalaat Se Sulah Ker To Loon Lekin... Mujh Mein Roposh Ek Shakhs Mar Jayega... |
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#8
06-23-2008, 09:22 AM
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Kabhi Apni Hasi Pe Bhi Aata Hai Gussa Kabhi Saare Jahan Ko Hasane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Chupa Leta Hai Gamo Ko Bhi Kisi Kone Mein Ye Dil Kabhi Kisi Ko Sab Kuch Sunane Koji Chahta Hai Kabhi Rota Nahi Mann Kisi Kimaut Par Bhi Kabhi Yoon Hi Aansoo Bahane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Lagta Hai Acha Aakash Mein Aazad Udna Kabhi Kisi Bandhan Mein Bandh Jaane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Sagar Ki Lehron Se Bhi Darta Nahi Dil Kabhi Unhi Lehron Mein Sama Jaane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Lagte Hai Apne Begane Se Kabhi Begano Ko Bhi Apna Banane Koji Chahta Hai Kabhi Sharam Nahi Aati Gairon Se Bhi Kabhi Yoon Hi Sharmane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Milta Nahi Kisi Ke Bhi Lakh Kehne Per Bhi Yeh Dil Kabhi Kisi Anjane Se Mil Jaane Ko Dil Chahta Hai Kabhi Upper Wale Ka Naam Bhi Aata Nahi Zubaanpar Kabhi Usko Bhi Manane Ko Ji Chahta Hai Kabhi Lagti Hai Yeh Zindagi Badi Suhani Kabhi Zindagi Se Utth Jaane Se Dil Chahta Hai.
__________________ !!!!!Respect Your Elders..... |
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