Urdu Poetry Forum

sajju321 · #1 04-27-2008, 07:01 AM

Shame Firaq ab na pooch,ayi aur ake tal gayi,.dil tha ke phir bahel gaya,jaan thi ke phir sambahal gayi...Jab tujhe yaad karliye subah mahek mahek uthi,jab tera gham jagaliya raat machal machal gayi..dil se to her ma'mila karke chale the saaf hum,kehne me unke samne baat badal badal gayi,..akhire shab ke humsafar faiz na jane kya huey,reh gayi kis taraf saba,subah kis taraf nikal gayi

**13 Mera 7 Rhey** · #2 04-27-2008, 09:22 AM

hmmmmmmm nice.............

**solitaire** · #3 04-27-2008, 02:10 PM

nice sharing,............ ..

**HG_Lover** · #4 04-27-2008, 10:15 PM

sharing achi ki hay magar is ko plz ghazal ki tarha post kartay or acha tha janab

**Jaana** · #5 04-28-2008, 05:57 AM

WaH V Nice................ .

**Abr-e-guraizaN** · #6 04-28-2008, 07:19 AM

Nice ji.....par edit kar len to aur bhi achchi lagegi.

**Aisha Baig** · #7 04-29-2008, 10:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sajju321

Shame Firaq ab na pooch,ayi aur ake tal gayi,.dil tha ke phir bahel gaya,jaan thi ke phir sambahal gayi...Jab tujhe yaad karliye subah mahek mahek uthi,jab tera gham jagaliya raat machal machal gayi..dil se to her ma'mila karke chale the saaf hum,kehne me unke samne baat badal badal gayi,..akhire shab ke humsafar faiz na jane kya huey,reh gayi kis taraf saba,subah kis taraf nikal gayi

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

**Shoaib** · #8 05-05-2008, 07:29 AM

aray bhai yeh formation tu sahi ker lene thi,
chalo koi baat nahi

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