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Old 03-20-2006, 08:56 PM
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Assalamo Allaikum friends
hope you are all doing good
here is my first sharing ,, hope u all will enjoy it

Apni aankho kay samundar mein utar jaanay dey,
Tera mujrim hoon mujhay doob kay mar jaanay dey !


Ay nayey dost main samjunga tujhay bhi apna,
Pehlay maazi ka koi zakhm to bhar jaanay dey !


Aag duniya ki lagayee hui bhuj jayeygee,
Koi aansoo meray daaman pay bhikhar jaanay dey !


Zakhm kitnay teri chahat say miley hain mujko,
Saunchta hoon ki kahoon tujhsay magar jaanay dey !


Apni aankho kay samundar mein utar jaanay dey,
Tera mujrim hoon mujhay doob kay mar jaanay dey


bye
take care
ALLAH HAFFIZ
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AOA, VERY NICE................ .................... .
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Frist of all WElcome ... buhat hi umdah sharing ki hai aap ne ... khusburet ghazal .. !!
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Assalamo Allaikum friends
hope you are all doing good
here is my first sharing ,, hope u all will enjoy it

Apni aankho kay samundar mein utar jaanay dey,
Tera mujrim hoon mujhay doob kay mar jaanay dey !


Ay nayey dost main samjunga tujhay bhi apna,
Pehlay maazi ka koi zakhm to bhar jaanay dey !


Aag duniya ki lagayee hui bhuj jayeygee,
Koi aansoo meray daaman pay bhikhar jaanay dey !


Zakhm kitnay teri chahat say miley hain mujko,
Saunchta hoon ki kahoon tujhsay magar jaanay dey !


Apni aankho kay samundar mein utar jaanay dey,
Tera mujrim hoon mujhay doob kay mar jaanay dey


bye
take care
ALLAH HAFFIZ

2 sH@!r-0-ShAiriii sEc dE@r Fr!D

b0H@t hI KhuB dEAr

i h@P k aP y@HA rEH kAR bUhAT eNJoY KArE!N gE.

BUhaT kHuSh rAh@E!n


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sab se pahlay hum aap ko HG pe khush aamdeed kahtay hain chaand...bahot khoob sharing ki hai aap ne ....aur ka intzar rahega
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Frist of all WElcome ... buhat hi umdah sharing ki hai aap ne ... khusburet ghazal .. !!
thanx alot
buht shukariya ji pasand karne ka aur parne ka
mujhe behad khushi huwi appko pasand ayyi
thanx alotttttt
take care
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i h@P k aP y@HA rEH kAR bUhAT eNJoY KArE!N gE.

BUhaT kHuSh rAh@E!n


WALAIKUM ASLAAM
thanxxxxxxxxx alot musafir ji
behaaaaaad shukariya passand karne ka
ji inshALLAH main yahaa waqqi buht enjoy karoon gi mujhe umeed bhi yehi hai
app wahaan par zarur enjoy karte ho jahaan app ka dil laag jaye
aur agar ache dostoon ka sath hoo to kiaaaaaaaaaaaa hi baat hai

app bhi buht khush rahain
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