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Ajj mai ne dil ko......

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Old 09-07-2008, 05:56 PM
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<apnay hi kalam se hazir hai>

ajj mai ne dil ko darya mai bahaya hai...
sochon ko husraton ko ayna dikhya hai..


manzare e wafa na janey kub janey gay...
nigha ko ik khar sa dikhiya hai.....


dil hai k tadber e jafa ko manta nahi...
isay tehreer e wafa ka moonh dikhaya hai..


batai hai ajj inhay auqat nakhun ki.....
khod k hur zakhm inhay dikhaya hai...

<hope u like it>
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Old 09-07-2008, 06:10 PM
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Wah jee kiya shair hay !
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very nice ghazal
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<apnay hi kalam se hazir hai>

ajj mai ne dil ko darya mai bahaya hai...
sochon ko husraton ko ayna dikhya hai..


manzare e wafa na janey kub janey gay...
nigha ko ik khar sa dikhiya hai.....


dil hai k tadber e jafa ko manta nahi...
isay tehreer e wafa ka moonh dikhaya hai..


batai hai ajj inhay auqat nakhun ki.....
khod k hur zakhm inhay dikhaya hai...

<hope u like it>
boht khoob..............
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Kiya shairi hay... bilkul maza nahi aaya. for your information...shairi dil se hothi hay.... or ap ne soch k ki hay..... soch bhi chahiye lekin dil k taroon ko cher kar karni chahiye shairi....
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Bohat umda...........
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Very nice sharing.
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its really awsum
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vErY wElL...wOnDeRfUlL cHoIsE...
gOoD sHaRiNg...wElDoNe... !!
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