kahtaa hai yehii ro ro ke zafar merii aah-e-rasaa kaa huaa na asar...Zafar | | salaam dosto,
maiN aaj yeh Ghazal aapke saath share kar rahaa huuN go k is kii kitaabat men be-shumaar aGhlaat sarzad huii haiN jinkii tasHeeH maiN kiye detaa huuN...shukria duusre she'r kaa pahlaa misr'a:
Kharam=Haram
tumhaare=tumhaaraa
daa'ir=dai'r =[mandir] duusre she'r kaa duusraa misr'a: yeh yuuN honaa chaahiye:
kahaaN jaa ke maiN DhoonDhuuN? maiN jaauuN kidhar? meraa chai'n gayaa merii niind gaii teesre she'r kaa pahlaa misr'a:
ai baadshaah-e-Khoobaan-e terii..... = ai baad_sheh-e-Khoobaan-e-chaman tirii..... chauthe she'r kaa duusraa misr'a:
saNwar= samar [phal/fruit] paaNchveN she'r kaa pahlaa misr'a:
barq-e-bijli = barq-e-tajallii chhaTe she'r kaa duusraa misr'a:
abhii = kabhii maqt'e kaa pahlaa misr'a:
...she'roN ke aaj... = ...she'roN meN aaj... maqt'e kaa duusraa she'r:
...maut na aaye... = ...maut na aayii...
__________________ Khayaal hogaa, junuun hogaa, bahot abhii dil kaa Khoon hogaa bahaar hai door kii Haqeeqat, bahaar rang-e-chaman nahiiN hai Ali Z. Usmani [mere vaalid marHoom]
Last edited by Baaboo Babooshkaa; 03-11-2007 at 03:50 AM.
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