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/\___ Writer @f The M@nth ... September 2@@6 ___/\

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Old 09-15-2006, 03:55 PM
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Still today I think I have not learnt my lesson, still I make mistakes, still I forget what I should remember and what I should enjoy and I know that it could perhaps be the near future that could remind me of all this and again I could be found cursing my self for that ONE LAST CHANCE that I let go.

niceee queen ...nice attempt....liked it .....
specially this last para.....sooo trueeeeeee
keep writing
thx for liking and then QUOTING my lines..

but like i said.. its my forst serious attempt on writing so iam still a learner..
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Old 09-16-2006, 06:57 AM
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If I had just one last chance ………….. I encounter so often with this phrase that sometimes I feel it as a part of myself. Just before an exam, I want to have one more day. Efficiency is so good in that last day that if I would have one more day I can do great, just one last chance. When an hour is left to give a presentation I love to have one more hour, again, just one more chance to make the presentation perfect. These episodes repeat again and again. I know before hand that in the end I would be seeking that last chance, last hour, last day. Still I always do the same!

These are small little things in life. It would not matter much if I cannot make them the way I want. Yet, I am so scared of it. Just being habitual of it. I am too scared to be among those for whom Quran says (chapter 26 verses 100-102)

Now, then, we have none to intercede
Nor a single friend to feel
Now if we only had a chance of return
We shall truly be of those who believe!

I and probably you as well surely know before hand that we would not have the chance to return. I wish and pray that on day of Judgment I would not be saying this …… if I had just one last chance!
Bery Bery Well Writen Miss ............>-v
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"IF I ONLY HAD A CHANCE!!

"IF I ONLY HAD A CHANCE..” This is something that crosses our mind millions of time but then too we never realize the point that we should do one thing properly on the right time so that we could never curse our self for not doing it properly..

We face a lot of things, a lot of circumstances in our life that we couldn’t stop or couldn’t change.. some times we stand to it, and fight or enjoy it accordingly.. but then what happens?? We cry and yearn for the moment that “if I only had a chance..” time never stops for any one. People come, people go, people cry, people laugh, people move on in life.. but we…. We stay! And we ask our self for that ONE LAST CHANCE!

Life has never been good to me, it gave me harshness, it took away my happiness, my confidence, and gave me sorrows in return! Though I could have moved on, and have, but still sometimes I wait in life and ask my self umpteenth of times for that ONE LAST CHANCE!

Today I am contented with what life gave to me. But I miss those people who were very dear to me and now when they are not with me. I miss them and ask God for that One last chance to be with them again and be happy and to enjoy! When alas! I had the time and I didn’t care for it and perhaps took all of them for granted! And never enjoyed and had all the happiness that I could have shared with them and now I yearn for it. Alas! If only I could have that ONE LAST CHANCE to be full and to be happy and to be with them.

I made mistakes, I have been bad in what life handed me, I never realized where I went wrong, and where things slept out of my fingers. I made blunders and probably with all this I hurt my friends or all my near and dear ones. And now I do wanna make up but I know I might have lost many of the chances and for all that I cry.. and I want that ONE LAST CHANCE straighten things up!!

Still today I think I have not learnt my lesson, still I make mistakes, still I forget what I should remember and what I should enjoy and I know that it could perhaps be the near future that could remind me of all this and again I could be found cursing my self for that ONE LAST CHANCE that I let go.

I hope people would understand the point from this, and should live every moment to the fullest so that afterwards they couldn’t cry and curse their self for THAT ONE LAST CHANCE!!



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many thx falak bhai

but iam really not that good!! and compared to ur skills.. its nothing
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Bery Bery Well Writen Miss ............>-v
Thanks Falak bhai ............. just an effort to start, if I can!
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am falling in luv wid it
very nicely written....simple yet so nice n while readin u really feel the pain....
keep sharing n writing
awww...
thanx so very much its so touching u hear this..
thanx alot for appreciatig so much and
for all the added motiviation also..
take caew and keep smiling..mile
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Well, i won't admire or priaise only one writer here, in fact, i would appretiate all the writers. ........'cos last night i came to know that writing is not an easy task........for i also tried to write a story........but was unsuccessful.......o nly after writnig one line ....it isn,t an easy job.........So keep up the good work eveyone..... ..............
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