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**Aas** · #11 09-05-2006, 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by F-A-L-A-K

hay mate dont use this "CAN" ............... u have to Pray for me buddy, n i know u will coz u r my Janu na ............ yea its quite Xciting man !!

......... u know Aas now a days i am free, i mean there is no work in office so i have much time to write all these things ......... i think i can do it Insha ALLAH ............... Ah0o0

No work AYE....and it looks as if i have no where to run these days...except....off ice

WORK WORK WORK......as our Qaid said...but in my side...it's work work and then again work..if you are free...you can still work..and if u need to sleep...u can sleep AND work...u know..donkey's habbit.

**Aas** · #12 09-05-2006, 11:58 PM

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Originally Posted by ~My$tiCaL_^_DeViL~

If I had just one last chance...

To go a few years back in time, if only I could get one last chance I would start anew and mend my ways. If I could just undo the harm that my mistakes inflicted on all those who loved me so, then I wouldn�t ever want anything more. I am not afraid of dying. if To see my parents smile like they always did, to wipe the tears of both my sisters� face, to erase the hurt caused to friends, i would give up my arms and legs and still be happy and content.

If to turn back the hands of time I would have to burn in hell till eternity and never get to the earth and heaven again, it would be worth every little burning flame. I know dear lord I have been bad; a bad daughter, friend and sister but if only u could give me one last chance, if I could just erase the scars from all my loved ones hearts I would never want anything else again. They have been good always, they don�t deserve this punishment.

If I had just one last chance I would never touch those wretched things again not a single one of them. It was never an enjoyment after a point of time it became a craving and yet after some more time it became like a necessity to survive. I always tried to leave it, even stayed clean for a while but those dreaded things found their way back to me every time I tried. It has taken every ounce of my life my health and given me nothing except pain and treachery. With me it has also finished those who loved me and couldn�t see me the way I have become. Those with me whom die every second�

If I had just one last chance��

Dear lord, I would once again become the person I used to be, a person who loved being loved by children and adults alike. A person above pretences A person who was full of life, who always had a smile to pass and a laugh to share, who cherished family life and treasured all close friends and promised to never keep secrets from them. A loyal & Happy go lucky person, a person who was the REAL me.................. ........

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hellos people,
this the first time i am tring for a write up so i hope its proper technicality wise and other wise..:wink6
Awaiting ur views with anticiptaion...

take care and always smile,
u never know who is falling in love with it...

I admitt...it's hard, to admitt, one's blunder, but the way you have described your emotional fallibility, and imprefections...actu ally makes your script glitter with inner truth and a future idiom...which is...I am going to be on the right track....If I HAD One Last Chance...

You did superbly...quite expected....and yes.....

You never know...do you....if something like love actually happens

A.H

**F-A-L-A-K** · #13 09-08-2006, 09:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Aas

No work AYE....and it looks as if i have no where to run these days...except....off ice

WORK WORK WORK......as our Qaid said...but in my side...it's work work and then again work..if you are free...you can still work..and if u need to sleep...u can sleep AND work...u know..donkey's habbit.

WoW ................... Nice "WORK" dear

but at the end u will def. have $-] Ah0o0

**mainna** · #14 09-08-2006, 11:11 PM

As promised Aas I am here with my simple English. I am not a writer, these days just writing my Ph.D. thesis. I thought if I could write stories about technical things why not about the stuff always having in mind. Probably there will be very many grammatical mistakes but I give it a go:

If I had just one last chance ��.. I encounter so often with this phrase that sometimes I feel it as a part of myself. Just before an exam, I want to have one more day. Efficiency is so good in that last day that if I would have one more day I can do great, just one last chance. When an hour is left to give a presentation I love to have one more hour, again, just one more chance to make the presentation perfect. These episodes repeat again and again. I know before hand that in the end I would be seeking that last chance, last hour, last day. Still I always do the same!

These are small little things in life. It would not matter much if I cannot make them the way I want. Yet, I am so scared of it. Just being habitual of it. I am too scared to be among those for whom Quran says (chapter 26 verses 100-102)

Now, then, we have none to intercede
Nor a single friend to feel
Now if we only had a chance of return
We shall truly be of those who believe!

I and probably you as well surely know before hand that we would not have the chance to return. I wish and pray that on day of Judgment I would not be saying this �� if I had just one last chance!

**Aas** · #15 09-09-2006, 10:37 AM

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Originally Posted by mainna

As promised Aas I am here with my simple English. I am not a writer, these days just writing my Ph.D. thesis. I thought if I could write stories about technical things why not about the stuff always having in mind. Probably there will be very many grammatical mistakes but I give it a go:

If I had just one last chance ��.. I encounter so often with this phrase that sometimes I feel it as a part of myself. Just before an exam, I want to have one more day. Efficiency is so good in that last day that if I would have one more day I can do great, just one last chance. When an hour is left to give a presentation I love to have one more hour, again, just one more chance to make the presentation perfect. These episodes repeat again and again. I know before hand that in the end I would be seeking that last chance, last hour, last day. Still I always do the same!

These are small little things in life. It would not matter much if I cannot make them the way I want. Yet, I am so scared of it. Just being habitual of it. I am too scared to be among those for whom Quran says (chapter 26 verses 100-102)

Now, then, we have none to intercede
Nor a single friend to feel
Now if we only had a chance of return
We shall truly be of those who believe!

I and probably you as well surely know before hand that we would not have the chance to return. I wish and pray that on day of Judgment I would not be saying this �� if I had just one last chance!

Well what do u know!

Hmm...First of all....glad to see ya here...among us...A very Warm welcome

And about the write up....well...there's nothing wrong with it...is it? It's great, and it shows that, despite writing so much on the materialistic world...you can always bounce back to another universe...which belongs to you...emotions...mor ality and aptitude.

...cheers

And can I ask...in which field, are u preparing you P.Hd...! And your subject is....?????

Take cares.

**mainna** · #16 09-09-2006, 04:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Aas

Well what do u know!

Hmm...First of all....glad to see ya here...among us...A very Warm welcome

And about the write up....well...there's nothing wrong with it...is it? It's great, and it shows that, despite writing so much on the materialistic world...you can always bounce back to another universe...which belongs to you...emotions...mor ality and aptitude.

...cheers

And can I ask...in which field, are u preparing you P.Hd...! And your subject is....?????

Take cares.

Thanks for appreciation........ .. I still have to visit other threads in this section but to be honest I am not very fond of english, will take some time and will see if I can develop some traste here!

It is optoelectronics, electrical engineering.

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