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Old 07-14-2007, 04:53 PM
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For your love, I'd swim across the ocean,
or climb the highest mountain.


I'd give you the world,
and everything in it would be yours.



I'd make a rainbow shine for you,
and bless you with many miracles.


For your love,
I'll give you my heart and soul


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wooow really nice

thanx and keep it up dear
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THANK U FRIEND ........SO MUCH

MAY U LIVE A LONG
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Welcome to the club Mr. Nasir....

Now to the poem itself....to be honest it needs more rhythm and meaning...though one may see it's meant to be poetic and a romantic gesture to your loved one...but it still misses core bottomlines.

Hope you can improve yourself in no time....in the mean while...keep smilin'.

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Salam and welcome to the EPC..Thanks for your valuable contribution..you need to add some rythm to your poem....
Keep sharing and enjoy your stay here...

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THANK U DEAR INSHA ALLHA NEW POEM I WILL TRY

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Now to the poem itself....to be honest it needs more rhythm and meaning...though one may see it's meant to be poetic and a romantic gesture to your loved one...but it still misses core bottomlines.

Hope you can improve yourself in no time....in the mean while...keep smilin'.

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DEAR MY SELF TRY ....NEXT TIME MORE POEN ....... OK

YOUR NASIR

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