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This is a discussion on Without You within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; WITHOUT YOU THE DAYS ARE SPENT CRYING NIGHTS ARE SPENT DYING THE SPRING IS SPENT SHRILL THE EYES ARE WAITING ...
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03-20-2008, 08:22 PM
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WITHOUT YOU THE DAYS ARE SPENT CRYING NIGHTS ARE SPENT DYING THE SPRING IS SPENT SHRILL THE EYES ARE WAITING STILL MY INCOMPLETE LIFE IS TO FINISH WHY DON'T YOU SEE MY ANGUISH DON'T LAUGH AT THE DISTANT HIDE, BUT FEEL COME AND GIVE MY HEART A PERFECT HEAL. SONIA SACHDEVA,FROM INDIA.  Last edited by sonia sachdeva; 03-21-2008 at 08:23 AM. Reason: correction         |
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03-25-2008, 07:44 PM
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Good effort...rhythmic and rolls along nicely. Cheers 1.gif ")1")
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03-25-2008, 09:18 PM
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THANX A LOT......UR WORDS WILL DEFINITLY GIVE ME COURAGE TO DEPICT MORE......thank u again SONIA SACHDEVA ,FROM INDIA |
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03-25-2008, 09:23 PM
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U HAVE SENT ME THE EMOTION ICON OF CHEERS......IT IS TOO GOOD. UR PRAISE WILL DEFINITLY CHANGE MY IDENTITY FROM SAD ANGEL TO CHEARS. HA....HA.....HA THANX. SONIA SACHDEVA,FROM INDIA  |
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06-23-2008, 02:13 PM
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soooooper shariiing..fantastii ic choiiise...very well...W E L D O N E...!!
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