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This is a discussion on will be ok! .... by me (A) within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; We have said so many times, life isn't fair, but we are all wrong Life is not always happines, we ...
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#1
03-16-2007, 06:03 AM
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We have said so many times, life isn't fair, but we are all wrong Life is not always happines, we always have to have some hard times too, Even when that means taking away from us people who are very close cheer up because soon we' ll get the sunshine and everything will be ok! by, me (A)
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#2
03-16-2007, 05:57 PM
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Yes, we hope it does ... Nice poem...kind of free verse style.
__________________ A heart in pain longs for rain a heart asks for no shrine No heavens divine but for a heart that's mine |
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03-16-2007, 07:50 PM
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We hope that Inshallah every thing will be OK!!!  but It seems to me little bit like a prose............... .......... Anyhow you expressed your thoughts very well. Keep it up!!!! Cheers, Junki
__________________ Don't let someone priority in your life, when you are just an option in their life.... Relationships work best when they are balanced...  |
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03-17-2007, 05:28 AM
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03-17-2007, 05:30 AM
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03-17-2007, 07:33 PM
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Everything WILL be okay...just hoping tht WILL becomes IS very soon...yeah? InshAllah  A very optimistic approach there...like it very much Keep writing and we'll have the honour to read some good stuff  rgds, chalakie~*
__________________ ---With faith, discipline and selfless devotion to duty, there is nothing worthwhile that you cannot achieve--- M.A.Jinnah  |
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03-18-2007, 07:57 AM
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InshaAllah ll bring more soon |
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#8
03-22-2007, 08:08 PM
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very nice poem .................... ........ keep writing
__________________ Early to bed and Early to rise Makes s man healthy  wealthy and Wise ............. and i know you dont want to be so......  |
will be ok! .... by me (A) 
