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This is a discussion on Why?????? within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; You called me i came you asked for friendship i said okay you loved me i appreciate you did something ...
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02-10-2008, 05:50 PM
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You called me i came you asked for friendship i said okay you loved me i appreciate you did something courageous i praised you helped me i liked you taught me i was delight you went out with me i felt nice you stood up with me when i was right you came when i needed you you rushed when i pleaded you but then suddenly one day you didnt wanted me to be with you?          |
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02-11-2008, 07:56 PM
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02-12-2008, 03:44 AM
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yes i know. its not that good. actually this poem is one of my first. i just posted it here to let the forum know i still am a part of english poets club...cause they sent mail of miss you..thats all.. but soon inshallah will be coming up with good work...Just wait.  |
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02-12-2008, 03:44 AM
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thankyou so much |
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02-12-2008, 08:28 AM
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Welcome bak Marina.......  nice poem................ Keep sharing............. ..
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02-15-2008, 05:10 PM
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Hmm...the end seems a bit disjointed. That's my shrewed eye if i must...but the poem's well written and well structured 1.gif ")1") A good effort.carry on please.
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03-15-2008, 08:32 PM
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yes aas i know its a lame poem... but i had been working on my new poems and i was recieving mails of missing you... mailed this one to tell poets club that i still am a part of it.. by the way it was my very first poem. i wrote it when i was 16 and doing my o-levels. |
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03-15-2008, 08:34 PM
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thankyou zakiya..please check out my new poem..you are online...i just added it to poets club... |
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06-23-2008, 07:50 PM
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soooooper shariiing..fantastii ic choiiise...very well...W E L D O N E...
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