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04-01-2008, 09:16 AM
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04-01-2008, 09:31 PM
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[quote=Princess15;378 2268]My love was deep, But now its ended when u lied... My strength was u, But now I am broken when u lied... My feelings were so good, But now I feel nothing when u lied... My future was bright, But now I only see the night when u lied... My all trust was in u, But now I can't trust anyone when u lied... My heart beated for u, But now it has stopped when u lied My EVERYTHING was YOU! But now there is NOTHING CAUSE U LIED...! Hey all please leave ur comments after reading this poem that u liked this poem or not! and if u found any mistakes in my poem then please tell me because I m a bit weak in english actually I m a student thats why and sorry for the mistakes if there is any! Ur all words r rythmic...ur feelings r well depicted. good , carry on UR..SONIA SACHDEVA AUNTIE ,FROM INDIA |
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04-02-2008, 06:45 AM
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Thank u so much aunty
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04-15-2008, 07:20 AM
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When u Lied!!!  what an amazing thot...  awesome work... keep em coming princess....:headban g take care and keep smiling..  may god bless u always.. 
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04-15-2008, 08:54 AM
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Dear thank u so much
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04-16-2008, 12:06 PM
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as a beginer its a wonderful effort ... atleast you r not like me u know who cant even start .... grt work
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04-16-2008, 02:47 PM
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thank u so much
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07-05-2008, 11:45 AM
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nice yaar...............f antastic !!!!
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07-05-2008, 11:51 AM
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