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**-SpiderBoy-** · #1 09-23-2005, 07:57 PM

I waited, waited for my end to come,
Lost inside darkness,
Ease i feel,
In pain i am,
Paralyzed with thoughts,
Drowning in my dreams,
Still it�s not enough,
Why i am here,
What is the purpose of my being?
Dieing slowly,
All my memories are vanishing,
It is said,
It will all begin again,
My death will only be the start,
Because after death again,
I'll miss you from all my heart,
Why doesn�t my heart stops pounding,
When will i take my last breath?
Waiting here waiting for my death,
Don�t ask me why,
Just ask me when,
I am ready to close my eyes,
I know it will all start once again,
Picturing words,
My power of speech is gone,
Now a days waiting for my end,
When will it come�

-�ѓάĝ�ŉ ĤēāŕŢ-

**Aas** · #2 09-24-2005, 12:27 AM

Yaar.....try to be optimistic....dude.. .

And yes,....u have thoughts....
try composing them ...... which is the difficult part...

see ya around...

Shokh · #3 09-27-2005, 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -DARKSIDE-

I waited, waited for my end to come,
Lost inside darkness,
Ease i feel,
In pain i am,
Paralyzed with thoughts,
Drowning in my dreams,
Still it�s not enough,
Why i am here,
What is the purpose of my being?
Dieing slowly,
All my memories are vanishing,
It is said,
It will all begin again,
My death will only be the start,
Because after death again,
I'll miss you from all my heart,
Why doesn�t my heart stops pounding,
When will i take my last breath?
Waiting here waiting for my death,
Don�t ask me why,
Just ask me when,
I am ready to close my eyes,
I know it will all start once again,
Picturing words,
My power of speech is gone,
Now a days waiting for my end,
When will it come�

-�ѓάĝ�ŉ ĤēāŕŢ-

Hi,

Surely one of the best I have have read in this section :-v

Keep it up

3

-Shokh

**sahyra** · #4 09-27-2005, 07:12 PM

very nice.a very beautiful expression of thoughts in words.

**-SpiderBoy-** · #5 09-27-2005, 10:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shokh

Hi,

Surely one of the best I have have read in this section :-v

Keep it up

3

-Shokh

hmm thanks for your compliments ... and i dont think its the best other wise people would have understand it ..

and i dont see any people

**-SpiderBoy-** · #6 09-27-2005, 10:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sahyra

very nice.a very beautiful expression of thoughts in words.

thanks .... yara really appriciat it ...

Tarkash · #7 11-12-2005, 06:44 PM

3 it's really very nice. But i think there is a brighter side of ur life so don't wait for ur time

**-SpiderBoy-** · #8 11-13-2005, 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tarkash

3 it's really very nice. But i think there is a brighter side of ur life so don't wait for ur time

brighter side comes and yeh there is a brighter side as well but dark side is always there in ur shadow cant run from it ...

and no not waiting for my time abhi to bohat kuch kerna hai .. so many promises to fill so i am not waiting its just a poem ..

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