Urdu Poetry Forum

Gud poem but im sure u can do even better...im crap at poems but i do admit that i can post fairly decent 1s 2 xpress ma feelings...

Try 2 use mre intrestin vocabulary hmmm not bad

it just carry's on n kinda bores u...try 2 put mre enthusiam in2 it nxt tym

its sweet tho...lyk u

im not a poet so i duno wot 2 say...it aint rubish but u can do beter dan dat lol

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yeh i know i can do even better but i told thousands of time i write wat i feel .... dats it ... i felt like that so thats why i wrote like that ... yeh u can also do a good job in writing like after 100 years or soo ... thanks for ur compliments ...

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yaaaa i no thnk i'l neva b able 2 rite in a million yrs-ur just perfect in poetry n ur vocabulary iz of excelence! NOT! ppl jus giv u gud coments cuz dey feel sory 4 u n ur smart enough 2 realise dat it aint tru n dey dnt get a word of it-(shame)

Better luck nxt tym!

Hmm ok u rite wot u feel...

lyk u cud say 'rite nw i feel bloated cuz i need a tatti!'

insaan banjaooooooo larki,,,.....

take a chil pil dudeeeeeeeeeeeee

ahh u get a life ... duudeeni ..

optimistic .. :S ...

i cant compose my thoughts ... thats wat u are saying ... wow ...

thats some thing new for me ... you have no idea about my thoughts .. dude ..

u will surly see me around ..

hwz about nooooooo

no such word as dudeeni stupid ugly beast!

go get a dictionary :p