Urdu Poetry Forum

/aoaFor the month of August we receive following contributions on the theme of
"My Country/Nation"

The memebrs could write about the nation, the struggles that were done to achieve this lovely country, the beauty of the country and the people or whatever that you you feel is somewhat related to Pakistan...

Below are those beautiful poems, in the order they were submitted.
Please cast your vote for the poem that you feel is the best amongst others.
It will be appreciated if you briefly describe your choice

Here we go... /rose




Ye! the brave soldiers of my country
You are a living example of victory
You are the keeper of independence
Your faith is loyalty and obedience
During the dull and chilled nights
whenever the enemy strikes
with bravery you fight
Ye! the brave soldiers of my country
After Allah, we trust you completely
You need no armor
when You have our prayers
Every single drop of blood
that You shed
for the Holy land of ours
will not be wasted
In the life hereafter
with blessings of Allah
You'll be rewarded.
In this world too,
You'll be succeeded
You'll never surrender
No matter,
How much the war is a horror
then the world will see
the courage of the soldiers of my country...

by Ain

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let's move on
come on,
let's march on.

let's march to the way
which bring us to the day
when our flag will be the most high above,
our nation 'll be known by Sucess and LOVE.

let's make our land
the best to stand.

let's make it strong
by discipline ,faith and unity
let's give hands together
to fight for its liberty

let's be honest with our nation
let's be sincere to our ambition

we need to work hard,
we need dedication
we have to be his guard
to reach our destination.

be United and then see
the most advanced PAKISTAN will be.

(inshaallah)
by Ufaq
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Of all the countries rich and strong
'tis you my love, I always long

With peaks so high, with planes so green
refreshing to eyes whatever the scene

I was nothing and you gave me an Identity
I'm proud you are a symbol of my dignity

whatever I do,wherever I stay
whatever I got,what I'm today

there is no doubt,its because of you
You are my darling and thats true

No words I have, to show my emotions
They're higher than skies,they're deeper than oceans

by Danmurfi


/AH

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Yadash Bakahir ham bhi aadi thay dil lagi kay
Ab khwab ki hain batein qissay thay jo kabhi kay

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Danmurfi @};-

I never had any reason for any things its just i like it i love it

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everyone has written beautifully /rose

but my vote goes to ufaq.....keep it up

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~ CuTe FaIrY ~



Success is a journey not a destination

/aoa

My vote, for a wonderful tribute to our Soldiers, goes to Ain
expressed her thoughts in a rhythmic way,
all da best /rose

/AH

My Vote goes for Danmurfi! for his poetic expressions and rythmic composition.

Ufaq has also created a beautifull peace of art.

And Ain, I wonder if her poem is valid for this contest... As the given topic is 'My Country/Nation' ... Her poem is all about Soldiers, I believe its topic should be 'Soldier Of my Country' ... What I am trying to say is, Her poem has notthing to do with this topic(Directly i.e.). Anyway! What matters is whether the administration agrees with me or not. And by the way, I don't mean to offend Miss. Qurat-ul-Ain, by any means.

Be Cool,
Psychosaurus

/aoa

in the contest it was stated

...you can write about the nation, the struggles that were done to achieve this lovely country, the beauty of the country and the people or whatever that you you feel is somewhat related to Pakistan...

and surely when it comes to our soldiers (those who sacrified their today for our tomorrow)
do belong to this lovely land of us.

Keeping in view this definition of the contest..........the poem is related to the contest
and you are welcome if you feel the relevancy of this poem to the topic makes it suitable for the top place

stay cool

/AH