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Old 03-15-2008, 08:29 PM
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Very much hurt


He who is around me, who surrounds me
is harsh, arrogant and proud
i love him irrespective of this
but he thinks that i am bound

to relation i have with him
as i dont have any choice
no body loves me, nobody cares
myself i had raised this voice

i will have to live like this
is all he thinks and know
cause i am alone and i am lonely
and nowhere can i go

yes i agree that i am lonely
i further confess i am sad
he takes me forgranted
and i am forgotten
is the reason i get mad

whats my mistake, i love him?
i pray for him and care?
no i expect a little from him too
the problem lies over here

But naturally i can expect from him
as i also need love and care
sitting alone all day all night
with aching heart shedding tears

is that all i have to do
in my remaining years
or can i expect a better future
without any hurdles and fears

i never asked for fortune and luxuries
never i asked for money
just asked love and attention from you
will make my life easy honey

i feel so sad and hurt when you
turn around and dont look back
expecting i will come to you
and confess that i have been bad

but at that time cant you come
hold my hand and be polite
make me understand that you love me
and would never leave my side

but never did this happened once
i am badly hurt and offended
i want to love and to be loved
that is all i have always wanted

dont know where i am heading towards
darkness or light?, life or death?
but please God i am pleading before you
just take away my breath

If love is not in my fate
if he is not there to share
a bit of support and affection
attachment, fondness and care.
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Great Sharing Marina Sister very deep ,very touchy ....let me read again once more.........
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thankyou sooooooooooo much zakiya.
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Nice poem Marina.....keep posting your stuff here..
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soooooper shariiing..fantastii ic choiiise...very well...W E L D O N E...!!
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