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Marina Tariq · #1 01-04-2008, 06:27 PM

...And one day my prince charming would come
and hold my hand and dance me around
would take me up and up and up
to the frosted and beautiful folds of cloud

through folds he'll take me to the heaven
where the birds would chitter and chatter around
and the waves would play a soft music
the winds would make a rapturous sound

the sky would shower exuberant colours
milky, creamy, snowy and pure
combined to give spirited emotions
leading us to the infinite tenure

of cheering and jovial time of life
and leading us to a promising hope
that life would bring joys and beams
have faith in God,dont leave the rope

of silverline and lots of trust
of courage, aspire, desire, support
believe that love wont fail and sink
our lives are meant to be one and whole

me and prince would dance along
till the night is passed and the sun is dawned
till the sun is set and the night is borned
and that very night is permanently prolonged

My life will change to a wonderland
all the blessings will be combined and summed
my life will sing a beautiful song
and one day my prince charming will come

**junkifunki** · #2 01-04-2008, 07:19 PM

Another superb contribution Marina! well rythmic....but why you did not maintain the same sequence in all stanzas ...I wish and pray that one day your prince charming would come and your dreams come true

...will love to read some more stuff from you..

Marina Tariq · #3 01-05-2008, 07:24 PM

hi. Thankyou so much for the appreciation. Actually i was hearing alot from people that i write depressing and sad poems. They had started calling me a tragic 21 year old poetess. I felt bad. So now this is my very first poem which is related to love. Hope people like it.I thought it was childish and people will think that too, but your support is strengthning me.Once again thankyou very much for supporting and thankyou for the wish and prayer.

**Aas** · #4 01-13-2008, 08:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Marina Tariq

hi. Thankyou so much for the appreciation. Actually i was hearing alot from people that i write depressing and sad poems. They had started calling me a tragic 21 year old poetess. I felt bad. So now this is my very first poem which is related to love. Hope people like it.I thought it was childish and people will think that too, but your support is strengthning me.Once again thankyou very much for supporting and thankyou for the wish and prayer.

People say and refer to a lot of objects, and if u being an artist, a poetess or a writer are ever going to put an ear to every word of it, then you r simply not going anywhere with it.

Just a reminder that, its good to bring a change in ur style when u want, and not when the others would. And well, what's wrong in being a tragic...??? It's got the depth, the eye, the shocking voice, and the element of fate...tragic is what reminds us what happy times mean to us.

Liked your effort...up above...seemed completely in place and matter. Didn't felt as if u have really struggled for the piece. Which means you can write on a variety of aspects and wider your imagination.

Godspeed

))

Marina Tariq · #5 01-15-2008, 10:37 AM

Thankyou very much for appreciating my effort and work. And thanks for such supportive words. i really am glad. your advise that "its good to bring a change in ur style when u want, and not when the others would", its too true. from next time i will definitely change my style when i will feel like doing it. Thanks once agian

**Zakia** · #6 01-19-2008, 03:06 PM

Just come across this poem Marina Sis ......
Beautifully written......

"On a white horse with a rose in his hand.
Taking you (Marina) to a fairy tale land.
With a dazzling castle in which to live
and a generous heart filled with love to give."

I hope one day your prince will come
and ride you away in the setting sun,your lives filled with joy and laughter and destined to lived happily after.....

Marina Tariq · #7 01-19-2008, 04:08 PM

hey its awesome.

Thanks for the wishes. come on yar write it down in a new thread. thankyou sooo very much for such a cute wish.

**Zakia** · #8 01-19-2008, 06:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Marina Tariq

hey its awesome.

Thanks for the wishes. come on yar write it down in a new thread. thankyou sooo very much for such a cute wish.

Thanks for liking.......

I will post my own poem in the very near future ,i just need to polish them bit more......I am not as good as you yet..
Tell me where do u get your inspiration from...?

Marina Tariq · #9 01-19-2008, 07:18 PM

come on yar i am not that good. Actually i started writing poems when i was in my o-levels. i didnt get inspiration from anyone. . Inspite of this that i have so many people near me, i am lonely and sad. And when you are lonely you need someone.i had no one except a pen and a pencil. And this is how i started my journey.

**Zakia** · #10 01-21-2008, 08:48 AM

Salaam Sis....

Life itself is a test.....it is a fact that there will be good times there will be sad/lonely times....We have to bear these trial with patient,perseverance n prayers......

Keep sharing will wait for yr next one........

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