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RulesThis is a discussion on A poet in Vain within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; haha with a retarded state of mind...I come back again with something that is not me BUt...BUT...is my reflection, somewhat ...
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05-04-2008, 08:48 AM
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haha with a retarded state of mind...I come back again with something that is not me BUt...BUT...is my reflection, somewhat distorted...yet the reality! Beggers can't be choosers and choosers ought to keep their mouth,heart and everything shut!  anyway, this is my comeback...at a very low profile. ___________ Can I give you the credit for making me what I am? For making me as worthless as a wheeless tram? Oh! I thought I'd outdone myself, I thought I'd known it all, How you showed me light, to 'that' Hidden Pitfall... Ah!But not going to repeat it, it's a story so very often told, it's contained in several books, which are remarkably sold. I've felt enough of it, and you say you haven't enough said, Or maybe you've made me sensitive enough, and converted me into a poet instead? Meticulously drilling that pain, at tender spots of my heart, Woah! You just had to use words, for which people use darts! And the oozing of those feelings, like the oil from the ground, Hey you helped me find 'the' Land, that I'd never all this time found! That Land where I could... give words to my tears, Give emotions the Sword, to fight my innocent fears... Yet the words on these crumpled pages, dance softly under the shadow of 'that' Candle of Pain, which once landed me in a Hidden pitfall, but now has made me a poet in Vain. -chalakie- ______________ I'm ending it here because the feelings which I had gone through to be able to write this...had empowered me so badly that I couldn't write in peace Extreme lack of inspiration and like Milton I couldn't invoke a Muse...still I tried my best.Wa'salam peeps.                  |
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05-05-2008, 02:27 AM
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Salam Chalakie Sis! Nice to see you here after so many days...hmm busy scientists are always retarted and so you I know the very solid reason behind your this state of mind i.e. trying to disprove the realitivity theory ..apart from joke, a very nice poem indeed..I liked these two stanzas...Ah!But not going to repeat it, it's a story so very often told, it's contained in several books, which are remarkably sold (this one is awesome!) and this one That Land where I could... give words to my tears, Give emotions the Sword, to fight my innocent fears... Keep sharing your beautiful thougts and visions with us...Hey! how your studies are going on and how are your backyard bunnies and the ginger cat in your neighbourhood ....loads of prayers for you..now waiting for the next poem  Cheers, Junki Quote:
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05-05-2008, 03:08 AM
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W/alaikum asaaaaaaaaalam Bhai Pardon me for that long salaam...but I had posted a thread for you and some others in 'Help and Feedback' Section just yesterday Yeah yeah yeah...everyone teases me at home ...you know Scientist and all and now you as well...but I really was missing that  My studies, Alhamdolilah the previous semester went very well and my finals just finished on the 30th...and I had 5 days off...so tomorrow I have to get back to work...remember I posted a thread regarding Resume? Well you guys helped a lot and it worked No bunnies...has been snowing so far...so no sign of spring yet but hopefully we'll get that warm weather pretty soon InshAllah. How's life treating you? Getting closer aren't we...to 'that' day well THANKS for your comments and am really glad to see you here. take care, -chalakie Quote:
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05-05-2008, 10:20 PM
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Aha! nice to know that you got that job MashAllah , so where is the treat ??? ...yeah 'that' day is very near and I'm waiting eagerly for that...even 'that' day could come much before but you know the official procedures in helding the examination and the delays by these nutty professors ...even nowadays I'm applying for jobs to different companies ..let's see when I'll get my dream job..give me some tips Cheers, Junki Quote:
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05-06-2008, 12:26 AM
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nutty Profs...ohhh I could laugh on this forever, I too am irritated by them...they r really absent-minded Oh InshAllah...you'd get one...hey why don't u become a Prof urself it'd be soo cool...Prof JunkiFunki..to get a job...u have to impress the right ppl at the right time wish u tons of luck...and May Allah help you! rgds, -chalakie |
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05-06-2008, 11:49 PM
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 ..I don't wanna be nutty that's why I dont want to be a Prof. .. Believe me, if you see my Prof., you'll laugh and laugh...what about you?? why not Prof. Chalakie  yeah! to get a cool job, you have to impress right people at right time...let's see within few days I am going to have a very important interview  .. thanks for the prayers 1.gif ")1") ... btw your siggy is very nice Last edited by junkifunki; 05-06-2008 at 11:51 PM. |
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05-07-2008, 08:35 AM
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A very accomplished effort. I hope whatever u are suffering these days will be over soon with |
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