Urdu Poetry Forum

**shumyla4** · #1 07-02-2008, 07:55 AM

MY FIRST!
you were my first love ,
you were my last love,
you were in my thoughts &
used to play with my dreams,
why does this happen, "i ask?"
where my love for you ,
was deeper then the stream.
those were the days we used to be together,
thinking of our innocent love,which would last for ever.
you were my today, tomorrow, and everafter ,
which always used to give me immense pleasure.
why did you leave me and break my heart?
left me all alone, tears in my eyes,
i was to afraid thinking of feeling apart.
but now those days are gone,
i used to feel the pain,
& i wished that they
would never return again.
i have to be stronger,
make my heart like storm,
i have some duties ,
which i have to perform.
i have to make my life sweeter and brighter,
moments of our love shine everafter.
this is the promise which i have to keep,
i dont want to waste my life & even weep................ ....
SHUMAILA

javed_engineer · #2 07-02-2008, 09:07 AM

nice keep it up shumaila

javed

**JawadG** · #3 07-03-2008, 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shumyla4

MY FIRST!
you were my first love ,
you were my last love,
you were in my thoughts &
used to play with my dreams,
why does this happen, "i ask?"
where my love for you ,
was deeper then the stream.
those were the days we used to be together,
thinking of our innocent love,which would last for ever.
you were my today, tomorrow, and everafter ,
which always used to give me immense pleasure.
why did you leave me and break my heart?
left me all alone, tears in my eyes,
i was to afraid thinking of feeling apart.
but now those days are gone,
i used to feel the pain,
& i wished that they
would never return again.
i have to be stronger,
make my heart like storm,
i have some duties ,
which i have to perform.
i have to make my life sweeter and brighter,
moments of our love shine everafter.
this is the promise which i have to keep,
i dont want to waste my life & even weep................ ....
SHUMAILA

very nice

Keep sharing

**life.** · #4 07-03-2008, 08:04 PM

v nice sharing...........

**shumyla4** · #5 07-07-2008, 08:53 AM

thanks alot that u liked my poetry, ur appreciations and notified mistakes will make me to write in better ways.........

**silent_wishes** · #6 07-07-2008, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shumyla4

MY FIRST!
you were my first love ,
you were my last love,
you were in my thoughts &
used to play with my dreams,
why does this happen, "i ask?"
where my love for you ,
was deeper then the stream.
those were the days we used to be together,
thinking of our innocent love,which would last for ever.
you were my today, tomorrow, and everafter ,
which always used to give me immense pleasure.
why did you leave me and break my heart?
left me all alone, tears in my eyes,
i was to afraid thinking of feeling apart.
but now those days are gone,
i used to feel the pain,
& i wished that they
would never return again.
i have to be stronger,
make my heart like storm,
i have some duties ,
which i have to perform.
i have to make my life sweeter and brighter,
moments of our love shine everafter.
this is the promise which i have to keep,
i dont want to waste my life & even weep................ ....
SHUMAILA

Very nice Shumaila
i really liked ur tought...
it truely pleased me

in the same thought i wrote some urdu verses last year....i wud like to share these here

haqeeqat talkh hai itni bayaN main ker nahi sakta
kahoonga bas main itna hi ke main kuch ker nahi sakta
bohot mushkil hai tum bin zinda rehna bhi magar janaaN
muje ab aur jeena hai ke maiN ab mar nahi sakta
larroonga zeest se har dam tera gham dil main dafna ker
meraa jeena hai pur.maqsad main aahain bhaar nahi sakta

be happy
keep it up