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This is a discussion on my dear friend within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; i gave you a chance no, i gave you too many! but you stayed the same the same crooked penny! ...


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Old 10-06-2004, 09:31 PM
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i gave you a chance
no, i gave you too many!
but you stayed the same
the same crooked penny!

i tried to make up
accepted all your excuses
i always believed that
pure love never loses!

but in the end you left
oh!you mean old thing
left wih those aweful words
which in my ears would always ring!

i won't call you back
because i know you wouldn't come
i've learnt to live without your help
i'm no longer lonesome!

so, thanks for leaving my dear friend
i've got my confidence back
about all those lies you told me
about those things i really did not lack!

thankyou my dear friend
thats the best hing you ever did
i did all things to please you
i did all you bid!

i've finally learnt my lesson
things i broke i now can mend
the hearts i broke can now be happy
thanks again, my dear friend!

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i've finally learnt my lesson
things i broke i now can ment
the hearts i broke can now be happy
thanks again, my dear friend!

somewhat sad poem but nice , very well written

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keep writing and keep sharing sis

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hmm aii smarty pants abb pata chala itnay dinoo say kahan then cool koi baat nahi ,,, sis ... life is life ... just stand up and start living it again .....
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i've finally learnt my lesson
things i broke i now can ment
the hearts i broke can now be happy
thanks again, my dear friend!

somewhat sad poem but nice , very well written

/weldone

keep writing and keep sharing sis

/flowers

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thankooooooooo sis!!!
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hmm aii smarty pants abb pata chala itnay dinoo say kahan then cool koi baat nahi ,,, sis ... life is life ... just stand up and start living it again .....
hain?kiya pata chala??
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arry kuch nahi yaara just kidding .. ...
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ohkk....../thinking
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