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Old 09-07-2006, 01:12 PM
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yelloz!! hows everyone han??hmm...wrote this piece a while ago...wanted to share i9t wid u guys...-:? wattup everyone??remembner meeee??


When things go wrong,
And when I want to die.
When people turn away,
And when I want to cry.

When I feel like running away,
And when I want to hide.
When I want to end it all,
And no one’s by my side.

When I think about things,
And ask meaningless questions.
You somehow always come up with,
Some very good suggestions.

Oh! What would I ever be?
Without YOU in my life?
I would’ve died by now,
If you hadn’t encouraged me to thrive!

There still are some things,
That I can’t tell you!
Though you’ll surely understand,
Oh! How can I thank you?

You are my island of hope,
In an ocean full of sharks.
Amongst people like piranhas,
And a past of dark marks!

You re my tank of oxygen,
A breath of fresh spring!
Because even in the darkest of times,
A smile on my face you always bring!

You are my escape route,
My friend when I am alone.
You are always there to mend things up,
When the mighty wind has blown!

You are my umbrella,
When it rains like shattering glass,
And when the ground turns to thorns,
You are like fresh, green grass!
Oh! How could I tell you?
What you mean to me!
You are a cuckoo of the skies!
And a dolphin of the sea!

Cuckoo: Harbinger of spring
Dolphin: Saviour of the seas and a very friendly animal!
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Salaams:

Thank you for your concern...yups..hope every one's fine...

Nice composition u came up with...though the resemblances were a bit technical..but none the less...in accord to the modren day hip hop tune

Keep sharing with us...and have a wonderful time smart

Adios.
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how can we forget u ... smarty pants .... cool poem by da way .. where were u for all these days ... busy wid studies .. kia
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Salaams:

Thank you for your concern...yups..hope every one's fine...

Nice composition u came up with...though the resemblances were a bit technical..but none the less...in accord to the modren day hip hop tune

Keep sharing with us...and have a wonderful time smart

Adios.
heyy
walaikumsalaam
lolz....ya i guess a bit too technical;)
thanks for liking it
n thanku!!:D u too hav a gr8 tym... take care
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how can we forget u ... smarty pants .... cool poem by da way .. where were u for all these days ... busy wid studies .. kia
heyyyy!!!
hehehe...
thanks spidey..
ya busy wid studies...*sigh* bba ne menu maar chadna hai:(
it really IS very difficult!!how did U do it???
n how ru btw han??watup?????
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Well i am fine n hoping the same for every 1 ..................

nice thing man !!! ................ Goodi Good
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heyyyy!!!
hehehe...
thanks spidey..
ya busy wid studies...*sigh* bba ne menu maar chadna hai:(
it really IS very difficult!!how did U do it???
n how ru btw han??watup?????

hahaha ... how did i do it ..

well i was a good student ...
yaar really in some subjects i cheated and in some i really worked hard all the subjects dat included maths in it i cheated bec i am really week in mathamatics and with numbers and in other subjects i really worked hard and went through them bec i am really really good in theory and when it came to make projects and reports i had a nerd who was really afraid of me .. he use to do it for me .. so dats pretty much how i did my bba ....

and i am doing a job now a days ... got a really cool job .. my first eva job .. in a call center i am getting 15,000 (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) a month so its cool i am doing fine its just now i dont get time for my self job and home aaah its really tough but still hanging on $-] $-] for money
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hahaha ... how did i do it ..

well i was a good student ...
yaar really in some subjects i cheated and in some i really worked hard all the subjects dat included maths in it i cheated bec i am really week in mathamatics and with numbers and in other subjects i really worked hard and went through them bec i am really really good in theory and when it came to make projects and reports i had a nerd who was really afraid of me .. he use to do it for me .. so dats pretty much how i did my bba ....

and i am doing a job now a days ... got a really cool job .. my first eva job .. in a call center i am getting 15,000 (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) a month so its cool i am doing fine its just now i dont get time for my self job and home aaah its really tough but still hanging on $-] $-] for money
lolz..ahaaaaaaaaaaan ...so mthts the little secret...hmmm...nice nice
i'll try to work on it too now[]
acha?? so ur done wid bba???tnee jaldeeee???:(
n now u'v got a job???????? wow
lol...thats really gr8!!!keep it up!!!aagay mba kerna hai??
or wattup?n wats new??
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