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#31
10-01-2004, 03:21 AM
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my soul wails over my misery ... this life haunts me like a mystery................ /clap5
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#32
10-03-2004, 04:11 AM
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 aakhir kaar likh hee dii!:clap wonderful!!!really.. ...../weldone corrections?dont think there are any... lookin foward to c more of ur poems....keep writin!!!/good1 |
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#33
10-03-2004, 03:51 PM
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lolz .. its the same old poem :D you have already given comment on it before .. its just that you don't remember it 1.gif ")1") lol and sowee for that :( timee naheen mila koi aur likhnay ka .. else i wld have definitely told ya 
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#34
10-03-2004, 07:30 PM
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no comments but it is realy very beautiful........ @};- @};-@};-@};-@};- |
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10-05-2004, 06:52 PM
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tx fer liking |
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10-05-2004, 06:55 PM
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but no comments  - |
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10-06-2004, 05:57 AM
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:( (: ((sorry... |
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#38
10-07-2004, 02:08 PM
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but still thanx for liking it agian |
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10-07-2004, 05:48 PM
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Beautiful effort Annonymous u asked for suggestions .. the flow doesn't have much problem .. just revise the thoughts logically ... forexample .. if u say, "I need dreams that I care for " Then look at its logical analysis --> If u need dreams means You don't have dreams ... when u don't have a dream how can u care for it ? so if it was so ... that you would say ... "I need reams that I can care for " Then it means .. that u want some dreams so u can care for them feel the responsibility and so u can give away the love that u have ... having some one to be cared for gives an out let to your love .... and if there is some thing in abundance sure needs an out let or else there are earthquakes I hope you understand my point here take care Allah Hafiz .. Nice effore once again /weldone
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Re: i need dreams that i care for ... 
yaar do give comments on it ... ;)