Urdu Poetry Forum

I have been a writer for a long time but I have never put anything in the public eye. So I come in here willing to expose myself to all. Here are a few poems I wrote this past week. I figured might as well give my latest efforts. Nice board and I hope to gain some new friends


Circle Cells

Ceaseless beats breath one's years
Rhythmical linger with measured chime

Would their perfect moments end in tears
Delicious diligence mocks scorched time

Harbored, tied and boxed so slight
Alpha brighter to darkness alive

Can sprung dreams hold viciously tight
Plateau obscured seeds deep inside

Wind warped driven Saint of lies
Fill my basket and here my cries
When will I fly and soar above the rest
Wrinkled flesh and torn soul was my best

Red stains and black coal hearts
Are what set I and them apart
Blooming hero's in painted masks
The same, the same with bi-polar tasks

Trapped boxed freedom so bitterly close
Life and time are but ego's silly hosts
Fabricated cells so blush and new
Comes to an end and gives no clue



True Friends

Stop looking at me
See me in you and look at you

If you see in me a need to change
then you need change in you

Look at you and see me
then change me to you

Me and you are the same
And when you look into me, you see you

So look at you and you won't even see me
Then me and you can be us

Because in us
Is where frienship starts
Not in you or me




Birdman


Raven, Raven flying so high
Can you tell me, when will I die?

Or when you fly overhead
Will I fill you full of lead?

But,
These are questions, I am quite sure
That will never agian reoccur

For just as you cannot speak
I would not shoot, for I am weak





Carp Kill

My guts hurt yesterday more than they should
I have left my mark in the bowl of waste as I could
But still the pain is there and quite sharp
Maybe I should have not eaten the uncooked Carp

My father and me caught it just before three
Oversized goldfish is all it is you know
Eaten many regualr size of those before I was very old

So I just don't understand why my gut feels this way
The doctor told me this was the price to pay
Now I am in a small hard shell
And I can not see very well

Hello, hello there....
Why is so cold and dark in here?
Please answer as I fear
My guts are soon going to pop
And Sir? I have no air



Copyright ©2004 Richard T. Chase


I have many more as this week I have been writting something like 4-6 a day and I can't stop :pagal

first of all welcome to HG

yeah yr poetry is really nice /clap5 just awsome @};-

Wind warped driven Saint of lies
Fill my basket and here my cries
When will I fly and soar above the rest
Wrinkled flesh and torn soul was my best


I think u like to write about death and life after it ... /grinsmile

Hello, hello there....
Why is so cold and dark in here?
Please answer as I fear
My guts are soon going to pop
And Sir? I have no air

keep sharing and keep smiling /grinsmile

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Welcome to HG Sidestep...@};- @};- @};-

very very coooool poems.../clap5

If you see in me a need to change
then you need change in you

Look at you and see me
then change me to you

Me and you are the same
And when you look into me, you see you

Because in us
Is where frienship starts
Not in you or me

this is really good... very true too...

keep sharing... @};-

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True Friends

Stop looking at me
See me in you and look at you

If you see in me a need to change
then you need change in you

Look at you and see me
then change me to you

Me and you are the same
And when you look into me, you see you

So look at you and you won't even see me
Then me and you can be us

Because in us
Is where frienship starts
Not in you or me

Hello, hello there....
Why is so cold and dark in here?
Please answer as I fear
My guts are soon going to pop
And Sir? I have no air

beautiful poems /clap5 very well written

/weldone

keep writing and keep sharing , Always live happy

/welcome3 on hg

cute fairy /rose

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~ CuTe FaIrY ~



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