Urdu Poetry Forum

You are not what you seem to be,
Why can't you just understand me?
I am not a boy any more I am a man now,
You even don't know who I am now,
I wanted you father,
But you never wanted me,
Still here... Standing in front of you,
Feel my breath father,
Because it's real,
It doesn't matter if I have you or not,
I am still here,
Standing facing my every fear,
Well you also forgot my birthday,
You never sended me any gift or a card that day,
I don't need any thing from you,
But here is something from me to you,
I forgive you,
Because I am not like you,
I wane hate you,
But cant because my mother never taught me that,
Just wane say to you,
Still here... Standing in front of you,
Feel my breath father,
Because it's real,
It doesn't matter if I have you or not,
I am still here,
Standing facing my every fear,
I don't want you in my life,
I have and I will survive with out you.....

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hmm good rhyming
it is ALOT better than the 1st 1!/good1
keep it up!

well dude its a song i wrote ... one day i will sing it too ... and that day is not to far i can promise you that ... :D

gr8!i can hardly wait!

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its really a nice poem with many feelingz ...

yeh anger ... lots of anger man .... and thanks...

Feelings are all i have .... in my poems ... and nothing else .