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This is a discussion on A Drop Of Tear within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; A DROP OF TEAR A drop of tear came out and asked me, Why you called me out? Why are ...
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04-12-2008, 03:18 AM
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A DROP OF TEAR A drop of tear came out and asked me, Why you called me out? Why are you so sad? Why are you feeling lonely? Why are you weeping? Heart didn?t answered Than drop said Never call me out because I want to live in you Never feel lonely because I am always with you Never become sad because Accepting me no one is yours I was with you when you had born I will be with you till death When you weep, your eyes will become red When eyes will become red than will be pain If there will be pain than you will be sick If you will be sick than you will die So I don?t want to lose you because I am yours and will be always yours Ever and forever.....
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04-12-2008, 09:21 PM
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the concept of your poems is very different and rare ....and no doubt excellent |
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04-15-2008, 07:14 AM
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I want to live in you Never feel lonely because I am always with you Never become sad because Accepting me no one is yours I was with you when you had born I will be with you till death  no doubt ur entire poem s beautiful...  but these lines specially touch my heart...  take care and keep smiling always..  may god bless u..
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