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a cry in the wilderness

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Old 06-20-2004, 08:37 PM
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‘Cry in the wilderness’

Tears stinging my eyes,
I listened to the cries.

The cries, which could shake a mountain,
Those of anguish, those of pain!

All’s gone now, nothing’s left in life,
No use crying, no use to thrive!

Nothing works; all’s been washed away,
Completely torn apart, cant find any way.

God! Why did u give me a brain?
If I can’t think, if I am to suffer pain?

If I cant take my decisions, if I can’t stand?
How it hurts, wish he would understand!

Just stuck here, can’t find a way out!
Misery, distress, is it what life’s about?

The candles, passed the night weeping with me,
They’ll burn away too, and dark it would all then be …
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Old 06-20-2004, 11:04 PM
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/aoa

hmmmmmm......

but its a good creation /rose

keep writing

/AH
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The candles, passed the night weeping with me,
They’ll burn away too, and dark it would all then be …

depressingly beautiful compostion! /flower1 :flower /yhug /rose...keep it up /weldone
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The candles, passed the night weeping with me,
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very nice creation , very well written

/weldone

Always live happy

/flowers

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/aoa

hmmmmmm......

but its a good creation /rose

keep writing

/AH
thanku/thinking
wats this hmmmmmmmmm.......
for?
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The candles, passed the night weeping with me,
They’ll burn away too, and dark it would all then be …

depressingly beautiful compostion! /flower1 :flower /yhug /rose...keep it up /weldone
thanks mk

u r reallly tooooooooooooooooooo ooo sweet!
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The candles, passed the night weeping with me,
They’ll burn away too, and dark it would all then be …


very nice creation , very well written

/weldone

Always live happy

/flowers

cute fairy /rose
thanku shama...
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