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RulesThis is a discussion on ______ "This HEART wants more" ______ within the English Poet's Club forums, part of the English Poetry category; ____________________ ____________________ _____ It's a day to rekon I have no feeling A day to thank And i have no ...
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08-05-2007, 08:18 PM
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____________________ ____________________ _____ It's a day to rekon I have no feeling A day to thank And i have no meaning I feel heavy Like fallen off a ceiling But i can't unburden I am not healing It's the eve, of that auspecious day And i just can't lift myself comes what may You can see i am walking Walking slow on my own Walking these half lit streets Walking this way, all alone But you can't see my inside There lies a pain unknown A pain increasing and growing I can't complain and moan You are the world, how can you see How can you know, whats wrong with me You don't care, and so am I Who cares if some one lives or die The ashes run down the slope Ashes of those, who dared to try To fight what came against our nation But soon they found, it's all a lie A lie so deceptive You can't even cry A lie that lives within me It's like that pain, stingin' me And then i joined a crowd Like walking into a colourful cloud They stretched all over the terrain Hands in hands like a choo choo train But that train was silent and still Something in the air not there to fill And as i stood among you all I felt so numb, i felt so small I felt as if i am loosing my mind The lights getting darker making me blind When I saw a craker flying high And lit the dark gloomy sky The world around me gave out a roar And all cried out loud, "this heart wants more" "My heart wants more" "This heart wants more" Those unknown faces reflected as one They were as radiant as the sun With hands in hands, rhyme with rhyme The choo choo train whistled, it's time And soon every one was in his groove The choo choo train began to move The train which had no distinction of race No hint of the rich or any poor's trace They danced and embraced their presence And sang the songs of their INDEPENDENCE If it's a dream i don't wanna wake I don't wanna know if it's real or fake My heart felt more alive than ever When i whispered "Pakistan'll live forever" I felt so light, i felt so glad The pain in me started to fade For once i thought i am again Going to dance like an insane But what the hell, who cares any more This is my moment and 'My heart Wants more' Long Live Pakistan ____________________ ____________________ _______ Aas
__________________ A heart in pain longs for rain a heart asks for no shrine No heavens divine but for a heart that's mine                  |
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#2
08-05-2007, 08:41 PM
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Salams Aaski: An awesome song buddy.....liked this choo choo train thingy....indeed a good reflection of your emotions and feelings towards the nation......quite rythmic in terms of emotional ups and downs....liked the way you wrote mate...especially the way you endup the song...quite bitter in a sense...liked these last three stanzas very much: Those unknown faces reflected as one They were as radiant as the sun With hands in hands, rhyme with rhyme The choo choo train whistled, it's time And soon every one was in his groove The choo choo train began to move The train which had no distinction of race No hint of the rich or any poor's trace They danced and embraced their presence And sang the songs of their INDEPENDENCE If it's a dream i don't wanna wake I don't wanna know if it's real or fake My heart felt more alive than ever When i whispered "Pakistan'll live forever" I felt so light, i felt so glad The pain in me started to fade For once i thought i am again Going to dance like an insane But what the hell, who cares any more This is my moment and 'My heart Wants more' May Allah reward you.... Long live PAkistan.... United we stand, divided we fall............. |
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08-07-2007, 04:12 PM
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 hmm... no comments. the worth of such emotions can neither be measured...nor felt by anyone else except the writer...and in ur case song-writer himselfi have a feeling that the best place for this would be: http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/engli...__-157025.html don't u agree? |
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08-07-2007, 08:18 PM
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Thank u so very much. Yes...long live Pakistan...Longer and prosperous. Insha Allah. Adios mate. |
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08-07-2007, 08:20 PM
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No, I disagree. This is not meant for the contest....but perhaps i couldn't let myself aloof...so i just gave it a try and came up with what u have just read... Thank u very much for your....comments. Haha.. Adios. |
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08-07-2007, 09:18 PM
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anyway, upto u...but it would've been nice though. comments..yeah whatever  |
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