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well.. a very long time ago i wrote this poem.. so it must have some mistakes no doubt.. but well i wasnt able to write something new at present,, so am just sharing this small poem with u.. it isnt necessary that it gets in the competition.. so if there r any mistakes do point them to me..



YOUR LOVE, MY LIFE!


When I think of great love,
the only thing that comes to mind,
as synonymous as could be,
is the name of thee.

You are my love,
you are my life,
you are my happiness,
you are everything for me.

My heart beats for you,
the name on it is yours,
you are the biggest desire,
and the bearer of my heart.

My heart beats on your name,
my life revolves around you,
you brought sanity to my life,
and then left me INSANE!


-khushi-
What a lovely poem you have shared.............. mile
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Old 09-15-2006, 08:03 PM
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well.. a very long time ago i wrote this poem.. so it must have some mistakes no doubt.. but well i wasnt able to write something new at present,, so am just sharing this small poem with u.. it isnt necessary that it gets in the competition.. so if there r any mistakes do point them to me..



YOUR LOVE, MY LIFE!


When I think of great love,
the only thing that comes to mind,
as synonymous as could be,
is the name of thee.

You are my love,
you are my life,
you are my happiness,
you are everything for me.

My heart beats for you,
the name on it is yours,
you are the biggest desire,
and the bearer of my heart.

My heart beats on your name,
my life revolves around you,
you brought sanity to my life,
and then left me INSANE!


-khushi-
Nice going queeny...easy and on spot.

But how can one leaves another...insane...? You might have a look into it!

And now...it seems the contest is really getting closer...hmm...nice nice...

See ya around Queeny....chao.
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When I think of great love,
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as synonymous as could be,
is the name of thee...
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hey sis,
the entire poem is awesome...cheers to you..
though i like this stanza the best...
take care and keep smiling...mile
u never know who is falling in love it..:wink3
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"MY HEART"


a sea of sorrows.....
an ocean of depth....
exausted and tiring......
full of regret
suffering n crying
seems like trying.....
trying to survive
in pains and agonies
of this world
where peace is
till far
nowhere spread....
alone and alone
striving
In the search of happiness
screeching and screaming
passing through.....
horrible dreaming....
from where joys now depart
a small world
shattered to pieces and
going apart
this is how.......
this is how.......
i describe
MY HEART......!!!!!!


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Bery Bery Nice Neha jee ............... (Y)
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YOUR LOVE, MY LIFE!


When I think of great love,
the only thing that comes to mind,
as synonymous as could be,
is the name of thee.

You are my love,
you are my life,
you are my happiness,
you are everything for me.

My heart beats for you,
the name on it is yours,
you are the biggest desire,
and the bearer of my heart.

My heart beats on your name,
my life revolves around you,
you brought sanity to my life,
and then left me INSANE!

"My Heart Beats For You"

"My Heart Beats On Your Name"

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm Bery Nice Queeny ............... So Simply but it gives the leason .................... ......... Nice >-v

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What a lovely poem you have shared.............. mile
oh pleaseeeeeeee i cant believe this thank you so very much
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