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Hello friends............t his is a small attempt for the Poet's Contest......Hope you'll like it and guide me as well.........mile

############

"MY HEART"


a sea a sorrows.....
an ocean of depth....
exausted and tirey......
full of regret
suffering n crying
seems like trying.....
trying to survive
in the pains and agonies
of this world
where peace is
till far
nowhere spread....
In the search of happiness
screaching and screaming
passing through horrible dreaming
from where joys now depart......
a small world
shattered into pieces and
going apart
this is how.......
this is how.......
i describe
MY HEART......!!!!!!


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Well, what can i say....very very Impressive ....

Two thumbs up...could work on the style...but..a very good contribution in the end...

Hope to see more...from ya...and keep smilin

Allah HAfiz
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Well, what can i say....very very Impressive ....

Two thumbs up...could work on the style...but..a very good contribution in the end...

Hope to see more...from ya...and keep smilin

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Thnkyou sir for your admiration......it really boosted my spirit.. (bhooot)........... I'll try to write much better next time as a wrote this one only in 15 minutes...........th at's why there are some mistakes which i have noticed now... .......But do give me suggestions how can i do much better..........mi le
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Thnkyou sir for your admiration......it really boosted my spirit.. (bhooot)........... I'll try to write much better next time as a wrote this one only in 15 minutes...........th at's why there are some mistakes which i have noticed now... .......But do give me suggestions how can i do much better..........mi le
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Well Queeny, i knew, a long time ago, u had written a poem on this topic some where...how about that !!!

Ok ok...but if u really have written...it would be wonderfulllllll....t o share it with us...so that i can scrap off your name and tag it with mine and win the competition...



Ok...enough kiddin'...but will be waitin' okies....

Chao....
how do u know??

u dont need to do that really!! and besides who knows if i would enter the comp or not..

inshaallah>-v i might paste sth tom probably.. but no promises yet.. as i still havent check my diary.. but nonetheless i'll try to come up with sth..
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how do u know??

u dont need to do that really!! and besides who knows if i would enter the comp or not..

inshaallah>-v i might paste sth tom probably.. but no promises yet.. as i still havent check my diary.. but nonetheless i'll try to come up with sth..
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Kinda Difficult..!!!...Hey ..it's French...look....Qalbi = my heart...u see...quite simple...

I hope no one who knows French would ever see this or else, i am doomed.

Yes buddy...u are 100% welcome...and 10% extra welcome if the weather is fine here...just post anything...and i'll give u all the help u need..which i think it's next to zero..as you'll do a good job..i know...

(and hell with mod thing dude...don't worry...this won't have any affect )

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Hello friends............t his is a small attempt for the Poet's Contest......Hope you'll like it and guide me as well.........mile

############

"MY HEART"


a sea of sorrows.....
an ocean of depth....
exausted and tirey......
full of regret
suffering n crying
seems like trying.....
trying to survive
in the pains and agonies
of this world
where peace is
till far
nowhere spread....
alone and alone
striving
In the search of happiness
screeching and screaming
passing through.....horrible dreaming
from where joys now depart
a small world
shattered into pieces and
going apart
this is how.......
this is how.......
i describe
MY HEART......!!!!!!


+((
gr8 sharing i must say who knows u might win the contest straight away very impressive,, though i found one small grammatical mistake in the beginning but i guess that must be a typing mistake except that its brilliant!!

keep up the good job n keep sharing