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Originally Posted by simple n smart this life had torn me apart,
with darkness all around,i could see no light.
cruel people went off,breaking my heart!
but then,he withdrew the curtain and everything turned bright.
life seemed just like a sweet dream,
i took that hand,it felt so good!
the only one who cared,upon whom i could lean;
i would have stopped the time if i could.
i realized life didn't just have a dark side,
his smile,washed away all my grief;
no longer i felt the sorrow,nor did i want to hide!
he gave me the shift i needed,it was indeed a relief!
*all characters discussed above are purely imaginative!!!! 0:-) | Beautiful, it is --- Very Good! 
Imaginative characters, hmmm! Anyway, I dedicate this poem to YOU! b-) 1.gif ")1")
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