I guess the structure of the poem can be changed a bit, and instead of repeating 'when you lied' half a dozen times, it would be appropriate to use this as a punch line rather than a mere repeater...

Converting those verses into a proper stanza of four would do some trick as well...

My love was deep
My strength was you
My feelings were great
I trusted you
And then ... you lied
You know, something similar...well its just a suggestion...so take it easy on ya..
Cares.

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