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I WROTE THIS POEM MANY YEARS AGO WHEN I'M A COLLEGE STUDENT AND I WANT TO POST IT ON 6TH SEPTEMBER BUT SITE CLOSED
NOW I SHARE WITH MY FRIENDS



I REMEMBER I REMEMBER
THE 1965 SEPTEMBER
WHEN THIEVES AND TRAITORS
BREACHED THE PAK BORDRS
IN THE DUSK OF xxxx
IN THE MIST OF SEPTEMBER
I REMEMBER I REMEMBER

THE PAK ARMY BRAVE AND VAILANT GAY AND GALLANT
WITH HEROIC SPLENDOUR AND BRAVERY
BUT VERY FEW IN NUMBER
IN 1965 SEPTEMBER
I REMEMBER I REMEMBER

ON B.R.B CANNAL BANKS
IN THE GREATEST BATTLE OF TANKS, TANKS, AND TANKS
HUGE AND BLACK LIKE ELEPHENTS
TRAMPING PAK LANDS
BANGING AND ROARING OF THUNDER
IN 1965 SEPTEMBER

PATIENTLY AND CLAMLY THEY WATCHED
THE PERVADING AND APPROACHING TANKS, TANKS, AND TANKS
IN 1965 SEPTEMBER
I REMEMBER I REMEMBER

THE COMMANDER WITH HANDFULL OF MEN, COURAGEOUS AND GAY
STEADILY STOOD SMILE AND SAY
''GOD IS WITH YOU MY MEN''

IN EVERY CONTEST OF LIFE SMALL OR GREAT
QUALITY NOT THE QUANTITY DOMINATE
''CHARGE'' THE TANKS OF ''ASHAB-I-L-FEEL
CRUSH AND SMASH THEM LIKE '''ABABEEL''

TANKS IN FRONT OF THEM
TANKS TO RIGHT OF THEM
TANKS TO LEFT OF THEM
TANKS ALL AROUND THEM
ROARING AND THUNDRING
FLAMING AND SHELLING
FIRE FLAME AND THUNDER
IN THE HEROIC BATTLE OF 1965 SEPTEMBER
I REMEMBER I REMEMBER

''DUST THOU ART, DUST THOU BE''
BUT EVER WILL REMAIN THE NAME OF SHAHEED AZIZ BHATTI
WHO WON THE BATTLE OF 1965 SEPTEMBER
I REMEMBER I REMEMBER

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KION HAY ANDHERI SHAB E GHAM HAY BALAOUN KA NAZWAL
AAJ IDHAR HI KO RAHAY GA DEEDA E AKHTAR KHULA

Very very impressive...and patriotic....





May God give us the courage and dignity...when the need arises....

Ameen....

Bless ya primitive

aaj bho jo hoo ibrabim ka eeman peda
aag kar sakti hay andaz e gulastan peda
thx 4 ur prays
god bless u
thx 4 liking
belive
when i read it
my eyes going wet

Primitive my dear.....it shows that u have a soft heart....with the light prevailing in your heart beat...

make the best usage of this light dear...is se pehle ke zamane ki thokerain...aur insaan ke ghaleez taur tareeke....is ki lau ko bhujaane niklain....make the best use of it....

And yes....time is always short....

Amazing.. Like Aas said very well written and very impressive.. Very Thankful to you for sharing it with us. always be happy always keep smiling..

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zabardast b4bc ... u wrote after quite a while hay na .. a very nice poem indeed :yessir2:


THE COMMANDER WITH HANDFULL OF MEN, COURAGEOUS AND GAY
STEADILY STOOD SMILE AND SAY
''GOD IS WITH YOU MY MEN''

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thx 4 nice comments
i agree with u
time is very short
and journy is very long

sonice of u
thx 4 liking
and thx 4 nice comments
with gr8 love