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Assalamoalaikum,

1- 8 , very nice image, bus thorey se text effects sahi karney ki zaroorat hai

2- 5, iss image mein bohat kuch improve karney ki zaroorat ahi, text effects shayed baney baanye STYLEs se use kiye gey hain, larki ke image ki erasing sahi saaf nahi hui, larki ke image pe background texture itna wazni anhi hona chahye.

3- 8, nice image.

4- 7, nice iamge, mazeed nehtar kaam ho sakta tha, bus halki si garbar hai

5- 7.5, image achha hai, background ko achha effect dene ki koshish ki hai, something different, bus inhi lines pe mazeed practice jari rakhiye

6- 8, very nice image

7- 8.5 , very nice image, something unique

8- 8.5, background image mein larki ko paste karneu ke baad sirf larki ki image ki opacity kam hoti to background itna foggy na hota shayed

9- 10, very beautiful image, iss image mein bohat zayada mehnat ki gayi hai, aur yeh mehnat ful marks deserve karti hai.

10- 9, everything is ok, but larki ka image sahi paste nahi ho saka, itney achhey image mein aik zara si bhi khami hot o bohat numaya nazar aati hai, bottom pe agar aap dekhein to larki ke image ki line background image ke ooper wazey nazar aa rahi hai, issey mask kiya ja skta tha

11- 9, bohat zabardast image hai

12- 9, title mein spacing ka fuqdan hai, aur text effects image ke behtar honey chahye they, image pe bohat zayada mehnat ki gayi hai, magar text effects image work kelevel ke nahi hain, but still a very nicce image

13- 7, yeh image dekh ke mujhey apna kaah hua aik jumla yaad aa gaya ke iss iamge ki khaas baat yeh ahi ke har cheez alag alag nazar aa rahi hai, jab aap image mein different cheezein paste karein to unn ki masking lazmi kiya karein taake wo image ka hissa nazar aayein, bajaye aise ke alag se sticker laga diye ho'n image pe , text aur frame hai, kawish achhi hai shair ke mutabiq image banaaney ki, bus thori mashq ki zaroorat hai ke in sab ashya ko image ka hissa kaise banaya jaye

14- 7, very nice image, bus text spacing bohat garbar hai, aap inpage mein likhtey waqt sirf aik sada space dabaya karein, yahan lag raha hai ke aap 2 ya 3 dafa zaroor spacing kartey han

15- 10, bohat zabardast image, frame aur text ke effects bohat zabardast hain, mujhey jo sab se cheez pasand aayi hai wo logo ke ooper mom batti ki lighting hai, zabardast logo ke aik side pe lighting effect bohat thoughtful hai, nicely done

16- 9.5, bohat zabardast and graceful image, text effects dekh ke mujhey apney images ke text yaad aaney lagey hain

17- 7, image aur shair mein bilkul bhi mumasilat nahi hai. poetry designing mein sab se mushkil kaam poetry aur image ko aik doosrey ke mutabiq dhaalna hai, ap ke selected shair mein khaas baat kitab mein phool ka hona hai, agar aap wo add kar dete to bohat zabardast intekhaab hota, purple color pe white stroke bilkull suit nahi kar raha, text pe horizontal rakhtey aap to achha rehta, gardan terhi kar ke shair parhney ki waja se abhi abhi meri gardan mein bal par gaya hai
frame aur image mujhey achha laga sab se

18- 5, idea bohat zabardast hai, magar execution sahi se nahi ho saki, aur aap ek image ka size bhi bohat zayada bara hai, normal size mein shayed yeh image zada achha lagta, frame bohat hi bara hai, yeh frame small size mein bhi main use nahi karta ke yeh kambkht hai hi bara,larki stretch kar di hai aap ne, larki ke bottom pe jo alag se line nazar aa rahi hai wo nahi hona chahye, choonke aap ne image ka size bara kiya hai, iss liye jo aaina aap ne baya hai wo stretch honey ke bad , apni pxel se mehroom ho gaya hai aur pixel torns hain iss ki, designed by bhi bohat bara hai, aap ka zor designed by ke bajaye poetry pe zada hona chahye

Good luck to all participants.
I must say ke sawaye 2-3 images ke , mujhey yaqeen hai ke thorey dinoo'n baad iss section emin sirf main hi reh jaoo'n ga , baqi sab log Poetry On Demand mein tag le ke chaley jayein gey, but i stll love this idea of having more senior designers, keep working guys n gals