Urdu Poetry Forum

Salam Doston

Pehle Me Ne Yeh Design Try Kiya tha per Raaz Aapi ne or Khush Sis Ne Some Advise di thi is liye Unn K Valueable Mashwaroon per Amal Kia...........

1 st Image was Like This



Is Image per following Comments mile.........

Khush sis Tell Me

mmm. Text ko thanda rehnay daytay, text back ki aag baysheq lagi rehnay daytay,
couple ..... disturb kr raha ah , just Tunda munda darakht or Chand hi bohat achay lag rahay hain, .. couple laganay ka dil ha ap ka to CHuta kr kay chand may laga rk try kr lain , but os ki zarorat bhi nahi ha,


And Raaz Aapi Tell Me

nice attempt imran... bas text mazeed behtar ho sakta tha... keep on working...........


Rania_Khaan Sahiba Told Me

Very Nice work...........but text could have been better

Noor-al-sabah ji Told Me

nice workji.bas rext main sholay na hote to achha tha.image is v. nice.


So I Welcome advice all of U and very thankfull

So I Try following




Another Try..............




Hope Aap Log isey Pasand Karenge

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me kujh kahoo'n ke rehney doo'n

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Salam Ankaboot Ji


Bilkul aap ki Advice Ka me ko Intezaar rahega

U R Always WELCOME

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nice work bro....aap ne mashwaron pe amal kia jan kar acha laga....

mashwaray toh bilkul sahi milay aap ko lekin mashwaron pe abi aap sahi se amal nahi kar paye....beshak nazar aa raha hai k aap ne mehnat ki hai but abi b kuch kami hai....jo waqt k sath sath sahi ho gi......so keep working brother.....

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aap ne pata hai kya kiya iss second attempt mein
same effect rakha hai, bus color overlay ko yellow se white kar diya hai aur alienskin use nahi kiya

issi second attempt ko zada visible and easy on eyes bananey ke liye, bevel mein dobara jaiye, wahan neechey do color boxes ho'n gey , aik white aur dooja black, black ko click kijye aur ussey black se white kar dijye taake text par se shade khatam ho jaye, aur issey halka sa white outerglow dijye.

in dono effects se yeh ho ga ke text zada uthey ga image pe, iss waqt background image kafi strong hai, opacity kam karney se image ki khoobsoorati khatam ho jaye gi (cuz image light ho jaye ga), ss liye aap ko text ke saath khel ke text ko zada prominant karna hai

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Ankaji ki tips hamesha useful hoti hain aap in par amal karke image ko behter bana sakte hain.nice attempt.........

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Goooody goood brother,

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much better imran .... aap ne mashwaron pe amal karne ki koshish ki ye khud bahut bari kamyabi hai.. and a good step.......

abhi aapko aur bhi ache aur useful tips aur comments mele hain.. Anka jee, lucky aur baki members se... so just keep them in mind for ur next image.. and am sure k aap mazeed acha kaam karenge... wish u all the best..............

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yup better than b4 .. over all nice work bro...keep it up

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