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This is a discussion on qasam tum mera sir ki within the Designed Urdu Poetry forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; maine yeh shair apni siggy ke liye design kiya hai....
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#1
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| maine yeh shair apni siggy ke liye design kiya hai. ![]()
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#2
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| not bad shakil khan, acha hai balke bahut acha hai. haan thori si problem hai wo hal kar dain. sarakna aik hi lafz hai, jub aap Rey aur Kaaf ke beech space daitey hain aur phir text justify kartey hain tho Kaaf, Rey se door ho gaya hai, lihaza aik lafz ki bajaye alag se lafz lag raha hai. logo bhi clear nahi hai.
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#3
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| Nice One And Agreed With Ds Bro...............
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#5
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| Nice work Lekin zer zabar ke isitmaal ki gunjayish thi yahan |
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#7
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| Nice work, DS n Kinza k comments follow karein ![]() |
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#8
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| nice shair lekin ......is shair main mery khayal say bazo ki jaga phelo ata hia
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#9
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| aap nay space jo di us ki wajha say shair disturb go gaya otherwise nice 1 |