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This is a discussion on Pyara Pyara Husn Dekha Dil Ko Pyara Ho Gaya within the Designed Urdu Poetry forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; Pyara pyara husn dekha, dil ko pyara ho gaya Jo haseen chamka meri ankhon ka tara ho gaya Meri masti ...
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![]() Pyara pyara husn dekha, dil ko pyara ho gaya Jo haseen chamka meri ankhon ka tara ho gaya Meri masti ne mujhe ek chod do sadme diye Haath se sheesha gira, dil para para ho gaya Zeenat e aagosh ho kar dhal gaya sanche mein husn pyar karne se mere woh aur pyara ho gaya Qaal w aaraz ne falak ki saari rounaq cheen li Chaand koi ban gaya, koi tara sitara ho gaya Ek shoqi in ki kar jaati hai sab kuch bazm mein Is se batein ho gayein us se ishara ho gaya Karke vaada di girah aanchal mein us ne shukar hai Ek zara toote hue dil ka sahara ho gaya Hijr ki shab mein na chamka subah ka tara koi Haye woh bhi meri qismath ka sitara ho gaya Baddua nikli lab e jaan baqsh jaana se Jaleel Aashiqon ko marne jeene ka sahara ho gaya. Jaleel Manikpuri
__________________ ![]() Still on vacation....I will be not regular on HG. Last edited by hotkhan; 02-25-2008 at 10:43 AM. |
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| image bari hai aur text chota hai....kahen kahen spacing distrub hai...aur 2 imla ki galtian hain..... 3rd line mein sadmay word galat hai....aur diye word b galat hai... 6th line mein pyar karnay...yeh karnay word 1 hi hai kar aur nay nahi hai.... jo emboss kia hai woh color BG mein mix ho raha hai.....jis color ki stroke hai ossi color ka outer glow b de dete toh thek rehta..... n jitnay sheir likhay hain inn sab mein 1 extra enter ki bajaye in ko sath rakh k size bara kar dete toh text inna nikko na lagta........... Last edited by *lucky*; 02-24-2008 at 05:46 PM. |
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#3
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| nice . text effects kuch maza nahi ker rahey is baar try to improve ur text baqi aapka kaam acha hey |
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#4
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| text is not gud this time hk baqi achha hai
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#5
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| Nice work HK.. text kuch bara hota too oor bhi acha lagta.. colour combination acha lag raha hai....
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#6
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| Nice Work...mazeed behtri ki gunjaish hia...image me kafi jaga empty hai...
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First of all thanks lucky for the corrections, which i already corrected. And also made some changes in the text. |
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