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Old 03-07-2008, 08:01 AM
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aaj kal aap aisi ghazlen...nazmen bahut design kar rahey hain...
acha design hai...text ko outer glow waghaira ka effect deney se text mazeed behter ho sakta hia...
text spacing disturb hai...it must b precise... keep it up
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aaj kal aap aisi ghazlen...nazmen bahut design kar rahey hain...
acha design hai...text ko outer glow waghaira ka effect deney se text mazeed behter ho sakta hia...
text spacing disturb hai...it must b precise... keep it up
thanks PD, "aisi" is ka matlab kya hai?

thanks for the suggestion i will try the outer glow and check,

PD pehle bhi mein ne kaha tha ke kabhi bhi mein, inpage ki file ke saath khichum taani nahi karta, could you please clarify exactly how to justify thet text more precisely.
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Nice image...
2nd one is better.
And there is spacing problem. The space in "Ja" and "gti" of "Jagti" is more than others.
Then space between words is also more than others. Like in 4th line the space between last three words is more than the first three.
Check the inpage settings Format-->Paragraph.
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outerglow ke bajaye text ko ubharney ke liye issey halkey se inner glow ki zaroorat thi, red bhi rehta hai aur about 30 pe innerglow hota to text iss background pe zada ubharta
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Nice image...
2nd one is better.
And there is spacing problem. The space in "Ja" and "gti" of "Jagti" is more than others.
Then space between words is also more than others. Like in 4th line the space between last three words is more than the first three.
Check the inpage settings Format-->Paragraph.
thanks janaab, i have tried to correct it
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outerglow ke bajaye text ko ubharney ke liye issey halkey se inner glow ki zaroorat thi, red bhi rehta hai aur about 30 pe innerglow hota to text iss background pe zada ubharta
thanks ankaboot ji, woh bhi try karleta hun
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