Urdu Poetry Forum

Hum ne darwaza dil ka khula rakh diya
Haadsoan ke liye raasta rakh diya

Yaad andhere mein khaye na thokar teri
Hum ne sulga ke dil ka diya rakh diya

Qurbatoan ka taqadus jo manzoor tha
Darmiyan hum ne kuch faasla rakh diya

Mein ne jitni kitabein thi is door ki
Kaat kar in mein hurfe wafa rakh diya

Pairahan in ka chukar jo aayi hawa
Naam logoan ne is ka saba rakh diya

Zindagi hat gayi le ke apna badan
Haath meine jo is par zara rakh diya

Haal apna na hum aey Ali likh sake
Bas utha kar qalam baar ha rakh diya

Dr.Ali Ahmed Jaleeli

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achha kawish hai, magar behtar ho sakti thi

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thanks ankaboot ji, kawish ki to hai, inshallah behtar bhi ho jayegi.

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khan ji
text space disturb hai aik do jagha
isi terha aik do imla ki ghalti bhi hai
aey per hamza nahin aaye ga,,,rasta main aakhir maina lif nahin hay aati hai gol wali
aap har img per logo aikhi jagah laga rahayhain
mainany shayd pehalybhi batay tha
yahan bhi agar aap logo thora bara rakh kay tect kay neechat less opacity main rakhtay tou behter lagta

over all look achhi hai img ki

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nice................ ..................

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Nice Ghazal ..................

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thanks QV ji,

Text space toh samajh mein nahi aayi kyun I have not done any thing, it is from the inpage.

Han imla ki ghalti mein ne theek kardi hai.

Logo bhi aap ne jaisa kaha waise hi kardiya.

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thanks raaz ji,
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thanks brother,
@ @ @ @

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nice jee nice ..........

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