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This is a discussion on Hum ne darwaza dil ka khula rakh diya within the Designed Urdu Poetry forums, part of the Designed Poetry Images category; teesray sheir mein word fasla k end mein alif nahi hey aati hai.... 5th sheir mein words...chho kar....yeh do word ...
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#11
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| teesray sheir mein word fasla k end mein alif nahi hey aati hai.... 5th sheir mein words...chho kar....yeh do word hain....cho aur kar.....aap ne aik sath likh diye....isi tarah last sheir mein baar-ha.....yeh aik hi word hai iss mein space nahi aye gi.... overall v nice work......
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#12
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| acha style hia... jo shape insert ki hai...wo kuch ziada suit nahi kar rahi... ![]()
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shukriya Lucky, ghalti ko sahi kardiya hai.
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