Is Ghazal par jaisa ke baz doston aur baro.N nay tips dyie thy amal karnay ke koshish ki hay and i am really thankful to all of you, specially my dear brother abuhamza for his comments and help in this regard. ab ye image share kar raha ho.N ummeed hay apko pasand ayege is main mainay conrners, frame and lafz ghazal ko change kya hay and i would like to receive comments and sugestions from every one of you especially the elders, who have vast experience in designing feild. sorry bat lambi hogyei ( is jumlay se aur bhi lambhi ho gai is par mujay Mulla aur shagird ka waqia yad aya ke mulla nay apnay shagird ko kha: beta bolo meem. shagird nay kaha ke ye to bohot muskil hay is ko aadha karen. Mulla bola: bolo aadha meem. Shagird nay kaha ke ye to aur bhi mushkil hogaya._) so bat mukhtasar karni thi lambi hogyie bardasht karnay ke lyie mashkoor o mamnoon ho.N

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