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 Re: Khoob hamara sath nibhaya, Insha Ji | |
frame to mujhy theek lag raha ha desert paen, but Bg kay brushes kuch .... 
overall nice ha ,
1st shayr ka last word, "Haath" ho ga ya "Haat" hi ha?? & 2nd shayr ki 2nd line , strat may , "AS" AS may 2 Med kb say anay lagin 
akhir may shaair ka nam ... "Insha" pr Takhalus wala nishan ho ga ya "Ji" pr ??
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