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**Raji** · #21 03-31-2005, 06:06 AM

I love this one:

manzil pe pounch kar bhi use khona paRe gaa
yeh t'ae hai tu phir shoq-e-safar kiyoN naheiN jaata

#22 03-31-2005, 06:20 AM

contributions tao buhat saray nazur aarahe hein yahaan... i willcome back n reply u all n will read all to0o

**perfectly_created** · #23 04-01-2005, 04:59 AM

door hai manzil raahaiN mushkil aalam hai tanha_ii ka
aaj mujhe ehsaas hua hai apni shikastaapa_ii ka

**Uzaiba** · #24 04-01-2005, 05:59 AM

Aankhon ka rang, baat ka lehja badal gaya,
Woh shakhs aik shaam main kitna badal gaya,
Kuch din to mera aks raha aaine pe naqsh,
Phir youn huwa ke khud mera chehra badal gaya..
Jab apnay apnay haal pay hum tum na reh sakay,
To kiya huwa jo hum say zamana badal gaya,
Qadmon talay jo rait bichhi thi woh chal pari,
Us nay chhuraya haath to sehra badal gaya..
Koi bhi cheez apni jageh par nahin rahi,
Jaatay hi aik shakhs kay, kiya kiya badal gaya,
Ek sarkhushi ki moj nay kaisa kiya kamal,
Wo bay-niaaz saara ka saara badal gaya..
Uth kar chala gaya koi waqfay kay darmiaan,
Parda utha to saara tamasha badal gaya,
Hairat say saaray lafz usay dekhtay rahay,
Baaton main apni baat ko kaisay badal gaya..
Kehne ko ik sehan main deewar hi bani,
Ghar ki fiza makaan ka naqsha badal gaya,
Shayad wafa kay khel se uktaa gaya tha woh,
Manzil kay paas aake jo rusta badal gaya..
Qayem kisi bhi haal pay dunya nahin rahi,
Taabeer kho gayee kabhi sapna badal gaya,
Manzar ka rang asal main saaya tha rang ka,
Jis nay usay jidhar say bhi dekha badal gaya..
Andar kay mosamon ki khabar us ko ho gayee,
Us no-bahaar-e-naaz ka chehra badal gaya,
Aankhon mein jitna ashk thay jugnoo say ban gaye,
Woh muskuraya or meri dunya badal gaya..
Apni gali main apna hi ghar dhoondhtay hain log,
Muneeb~ ye kon se sheher ka naqsha badal gaya..

***Moon*Corona*** · #25 04-01-2005, 01:02 PM

hmmmm

ik song yaad aaya hye sirf

manzilein apni jagah hein
rastey apni jagah

jab qadam he sath na dein
to musafir kiya karey .........

yon to hey humdard beh or
humsafar bhe hey mera
barh k koi hath na dey
dill bhala phir kiya karey

dobney waley ko tinkey ka sahara hee bohat

dil behal jay faqt. itna isharah he bohat

itney per bhe aasman wala giradey bijliyan

barh k koi hath na dey ,,dobta phir kiya karey .....

***Moon*Corona*** · #26 04-01-2005, 01:04 PM

/clap5 khob sharing hey uzaiba

**Ankaboot** · #27 04-02-2005, 04:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raji

I love this one:

manzil pe pounch kar bhi use khona paRe gaa
yeh t'ae hai tu phir shoq-e-safar kiyoN naheiN jaata

zabardast

**Ankaboot** · #28 04-02-2005, 05:00 AM

Aye Jazba-e-Dil gar Main Chaahoo'n , Har Cheez Muqaabil Aa jaye

Manzil ke Liye Do Gaam Chaloo'n Aur Saamney Manzil Aa Jaye

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Aye Dil ki Khalish Chal Youn hi Sahi , Chalta to hoo'n Unn ki mehfil mein

Uss Waqt Mujhey Chonka dena Jab Rang pe Mehfil Aa Jaye

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Aawaz mujhey Tum De Lena , Haan Yadd Mujhey Tum Kar Lena

Iss Raah-e-Mohabbat mein koi DarPaish jo mUshkil Aa jaye

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PS. iss waqt iss se zada yaad nahi aa rahi /thinking

**Uzaiba** · #29 04-03-2005, 06:09 AM

Thanks *Moon *Corona*

Na the jinko fikre-manzil unhe raas aaye manzil,
woh kadam kadam bhatake jo chale bahut sambhal ke.
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Kisi ko ghar se nikalte he miil gaye manzil,
koi hamari tarah umar bhar safar mein raha.

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