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Topic of the week - Udaasi

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Old 02-21-2004, 03:12 AM
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Sub ki nazmein perhein buhat acha laga.. kafi zaberdast qisum ka contribution chul raha hai yahaan tao .. aur phir meri collection mein bhi izafa howing ub tao .. ;;) ... Ub kuch sakoon hasil hwoa tao soocha keh kyun na main bhi share keroon kuch ... Meri diary se aik nazum ... shayir ka naam tao pata nahi s per nazum hasir hai ..


Aa Kyun udaas beathi hai... !!!
Raat andherey ghup andhere mein
dur chumukta chaand' meri angun mein kirnein bakherey
Apne wajood ki bunfushi roshni mein !
Muejh Awaaz deyti hai
Aa Kyun udaas Beathi hai... !!!

Shubnum se nahayi sabz patiyaan !
shubnami gulaab ki punkhari aur !
Raat ka serd mausum
shaakh se toote howe
churchurate pattay
Aashiyaanon mein !
Chupey howe taayir kush gumaa'n
jaarey ki sunsunati hawa
Sada deyti hai !
Aa Kyun udaas Beathi hai... !!!

Raat k pichley pehur ki yeh awaaz
mujh ko apne paas sunayi deyti hai
Shayid mujh se koyi keh raha hai
Aa Kyun udaas Beathi hai... !!! @};-
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Udas logon say garezan na howa ker
halat ki qaborn kay katbay bhi para ker
her waqt ka hansana tujhay berbad na ker day
tanhai kay lamhon main ro bhi lia ker

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/yhug

pasandeedgi ka shukria Huma /blushluv




awwwww u love my font color....thanks sweety /blush
i like urs too...pinky pink


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Buhaat achi hai .. thanks for sharing






Vaise i love your font color :blush .. so cool

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bohot achi lagi Mirza ji @};-



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husn'e ittefaq dekhoo....abhi online anay se pehlay apni diary main se yehi nazm parhi thi...aur socha ke bohot khobsoorat hai kisi ne abhi tak share nahi ki....main karoongi...:blush... tum ne kar di

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Danmurfi ki farmaish per

khyal rakhna
udasian besabab nahi hain
udasiyon ka agar ye mausam
thahar gaya to ghazab karega
na jee sakoge na mar sakoge
na kaam hi koi kar sakoge
kisi ko har pal talab karega
udasian besabab nahi hain

suno jo lamhen hain aaj haasil
unhen hamesha sambhal rakhna
wafa ke gulshan me chaaron jaanib
bahaar rakhna nikhaar rakhan
muhabbaton ka waqaar rakhna
udasian besabab nahi hain

jahan me kitne hi log aaye
rahay basay hain ujarh gaye hain
magar ye jazbe azal se hain aur
abad tak bhi yunhi rahenge
tum apni aankhon me saare jazbon ka
pahle jaisa hi jaal rakhna
udasiyan besabab nahi hain

zara ye socho bicharh gaye to
kahan milenge
yunhi rahengi tamaam raahen
magar ye raahi na mil sakenge
bahaar me bhi khizan ki soorat
na phool har simt khil sakenge
na dil ko apne udaas rakhna
har aik jazbe ka paas rakhna
milenge aakhir ye aas rakhna
udasian besabab nahi hain

/aoa

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so nice of you Mystique....aap ka bohat bohat shukrya, I'm really indebted to you, May Allah bless you aameen

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walaikum assalam
nahi janab shukria ki koi zaroorat nahi....mere paas thi ye nazm aur mujhe isay aap ke saath share karke bahot khushi hui.....bas duaon me yaad rakhen....feeamaamal lah
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KABHI KABHI TO YON HE CHALK PERTE HAIN ANKHY
UDASS HONY KA KOE SABAB NAHI HOTA
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DEAY RAHO KUCH OR DAYR YON HE HATH MAY HATH
ABHI PASS SAY NA JAO BARE UDASS HAIN RAT
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tere furkato ke udas rut mojy lamha lamha leay phire
kabhi taray derd ke dhop may,kabhi tere yad ke chao may
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KHUSE MELI TO KAYE DERD MOJ SAY ROTH GAYN
DUA KERO MAIN PHIR SAY UDASS HO JAON.
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