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Topic of the week - Udaasi

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Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey
Koi Eysa Shaks Howa Karey

Jo Meray Liya JIya Karey
Mujhay He Sey Batin Kiya Karey

Kabhi Rooey Joo Woh Be Panaah
Kabhi Be Tahasha Udaas Ho

Kabhi Chupkey Say Rakhey Qadam
Meri Pechay Aker Hansa Karey

Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey
Meri Qurbatin Mainri Chahatein

Koi Yaad Karey Qadam Qadam
Main Taweel Safar May Hon Ager

Meri Wapsi Ki Dua Karey
Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey





Buhat khoob bhai

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|| Aaj Bhi Shaam Udaas Rahi ||

Aaj bhi tapti dhoop ka sehra
Teray narm labon ki shabnam
teri bikhree bikhree zulf kay
saey say --- mehroom raha

Aaj bhi pathar hijr ka Lamha
Sadiyon say bay khwab ruton ki
Aankon ka maqsoom raha

Aaj bhi apnay wasal ka tara
Raakh urati --- shokh shafak ki
Manzil say --- maadoom raha

Aaj bhi shehar may pagal dil ko
teri deed ki aas rahi
Mudat ki gumm summ tanhai
Aaj bhi meray paas rahi
Aaj bhi shaam udaas rahi





Mujhe buhat pasand hai yeh nazam


Aaj bhi shaam udaas rahi /aw1

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Wah Humaaaa bachay

Kya silsala shoro kiya hai /yhug

Me ve ajj kal yehi soching see @};-


Oayeeeee /slap Yeh mein ne karni theee post tum ne kyon ki /haihai



Aadab arz hai :blush



ACha tum sochti bhi ho /realy ... yeh to surprise ho gaya /hah1




Main ne is liye ki /tounge ... keh main karoon tum karo ek hi baat hai na /sharmili



/rolleyes

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Humaa u know what jab tum ney pehlay yeh nazm post ki thi na tou mein ney save ker lee thi.. aur ab ittifaaq aisaa huaa ke abhi online aaney sey pehlay mein yeh perh rahi thi aur tum ko souch rahi thi ..kabhi kabhi ittifaaq bhi kitna barwaqt houtaa hai.. thanku (f) /hug1


love u... /blushluv



Awwww Naina /yhug ... dil ko dil se raah hoti hai na :blush




Love u too /love

Khush raho @};-

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Khaamoushi sey diloun ka bhar jaana
Aur phir baat ker kay darr jaana
Ek muddat sey tum nahin aaey
Hoo sakey tou udaas ker jaana..!!





Khamoshi se dilon ka bhar aana aur phir baat kar ke darr jana
Khud ko sochna akeley mein tootna, toot kar bikhar jana
Is jawani mein janey kaisa hai sab dua'on ka be-asar jana
Ek muddad se tum nahi aaye, ho sakey to udaas kar jana!


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koyee khamosh si basti koyee udaas sa gar
kaheen kareeb terey shehr ke miley tho rahen

Wah buhat khoob



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Udaasi thaihur jaati hai

Udaasi ka agurcha apna koyi ghur nahi hota
mager jub bhi nighaahon mein
guzargaahon ka soona pun khatukta hai
kisi ke aaks mein doobi howi aankhein
kabhi jui barishon ka saath deyti hai
safur ki shub
akeley pun ka gehra rung
jub weeran dehleezon ki pheeki zardiyoon per phail jaata hai
musafir ko mager phir bhi koyi poorsa nahi deyta

Udaasi thai'hur jaati hai
gaey mausum
Palut ke yaad ke dhunlakey dareechon per
adhori dastakoon ka shuk bitha jaate hein
sardi saans ke tun mun mein bas jaati hai
seene mein koyi lumha utur ker toot jata hai
kabhi mudut ke perdesi
ager apne na aane ka koyi paeghaam bheajein
aur makaanon pe likhi umeed beenayi gunwaa beathe
chaaton per baanjh pun ka dukh ut aaey

Udasi Thai'hur jaati hai
kabhi bichurey howoon ka dukh
khut ki muntazir khwahishoon ka koyi raog lug jaey
kabhi jub dil ke naazuk taar se likha gaya koyi khut
kahein raste mein khoo jaey
jahaan mauqa nikul jaey
jahaan sooret buney ghum ki
jahaan bey raunaqi ka koyi bhi pehloo nikulta hai
wahein kheema lagati hai
UDAASI THAIHUR JAATI HAI






Wah biya /yhug



Udaasi theher jati hai @};- ... beshak

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bohot khoob Huma....very nice
mayri bhi fav ban gai ye nazm @};-
bohot hi achi lagi



Aww thanks :blush



hai hi itni achi .. udaasi kam nahi hoti ad

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kisi ko udaas dekh kar


tumhein udaas sa pata hoon main kai din se
na jaane kaun se sadme uthaa rahi ho tum
woh shokhiyaan, woh tabassum, woh qah'qahe na rahe
har ek cheez ko hasrat se dekhti ho tum
chupa chupa ke khamoshi mein apni bechaini
khud apne raaz ki taasheer ban gai ho tum

meri umeed agar mit gai to mitne do
umeed kyaa hai bas ek paas'o pesh hai kuch bhi nahi
meri hayaat ki ghamgeenion kaa gham na karo
gham hayaat'e gham yak naqs hai kuch bhi nahi
tum apne husn ki raanaaion par raham karo
wafaa faraib tul havas hai kuch bhi nahi

mujhe tumhare taghaaful se kiun shikaayat ho
meri fanaa mere ehsaas ka taqazaa hai
main jaantaa hoon ke duniyaa kaa khauf hai tum ko
mujhe khabar hai ye duniyaa ajeeb duniya hai
yahaan hayaat ke parde mein maut chalti hai
shikast saaz ki aawaaz mein ru naghmaa hai

mujhe tumhaari judaai kaa koi ranj nahi
mere khayaal ki duniyaa mein mere paas ho tum
ye tum ne theek kaha hai tumhein milaa na karoon
magar mujhe bataa do ki kiun udaas ho tum
hafaa na ho meri jurrat'e takhtab par
tumhein khabar hai meri zindagii ki aas ho tum

mera to kuch bhi nahi hai main ro ke ji loongaa
magar khudaa ke liye tum aseer'e gham na raho
huaa hii kia jo zamaane ne tum ko cheen liya
yahaan par kaun hua hai kisi kaa socho to
mujhe qasam hai meri dukh bhari jawaani ki
main khush hoon meri muhabbat ke phool thukara do

main apnii roh ki har ek khushi mita loongaa
magar tumhaari masarrat mitaa nahi saktaa
main khud ko maut ke hathoon mein saunp saktaa hoon
magar ye bar'e musaaib uthaa nahi saktaa
tumhaare gham ke sivaa aur bhi to gham hain mujhe
nijaat jin se main ek lahaza paa nahi saktaa

ye unche unche makaanon ki devariyon ke tale
har kaam pe bhooke bhikaariyon ki sadaa
har ek ghar mein aflaas aur bhook ka shor
har ek simt ye insaaniyat ki aah'o bukaa
ye karkhaanon mein lohe ka shor'o gul jis mein
hai dafn laakhon ghareebon ki roh kaa naghmaa

ye shara'hoon pe rangeen saadiyon ki jhalak
ye jhonpariyon mein ghareeboon ke be'kafan laashein
ye maal road pe karoon ki rail pail kaa shor
ye patriyon pe ghareeboon ke zard'ru bache
gali gali mein bikte hue jawaan chehre
haseen aankhon mein afsurdgi si chhai hui

ye jang aur ye mere watan ke shokh jawaan
kharidi jaati hain uth'ti jawaaniyaan jinki
ye baat baat pe kanoon aur zabte ki giraft
ye zeesq ye ghulaami ye daur'e majboori
ye gham hain bahot meri zindagi mitaane ko
udaas rah ke mere dil ko aur ranj na do






Buhaat achi hai .. thanks for sharing






Vaise i love your font color :blush .. so cool

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