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This is a discussion on Topic of the week - Udaasi within the Bait Bazi forums, part of the Urdu Poetry - Shairi category; Originally Posted by Nickless Yeh Soch Soch Ker Akser Udaas Rehta HooN Main Kisi K Paas HooN Aur Kis K ...
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#31
02-16-2004, 08:22 PM
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#32
02-16-2004, 10:36 PM
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Udaasi thaihur jaati hai Udaasi ka agurcha apna koyi ghur nahi hota mager jub bhi nighaahon mein guzargaahon ka soona pun khatukta hai kisi ke aaks mein doobi howi aankhein kabhi jui barishon ka saath deyti hai safur ki shub akeley pun ka gehra rung jub weeran dehleezon ki pheeki zardiyoon per phail jaata hai musafir ko mager phir bhi koyi poorsa nahi deyta Udaasi thai'hur jaati hai gaey mausum Palut ke yaad ke dhunlakey dareechon per adhori dastakoon ka shuk bitha jaate hein sardi saans ke tun mun mein bas jaati hai seene mein koyi lumha utur ker toot jata hai kabhi mudut ke perdesi ager apne na aane ka koyi paeghaam bheajein aur makaanon pe likhi umeed beenayi gunwaa beathe chaaton per baanjh pun ka dukh ut aaey Udasi Thai'hur jaati hai kabhi bichurey howoon ka dukh khut ki muntazir khwahishoon ka koyi raog lug jaey kabhi jub dil ke naazuk taar se likha gaya koyi khut kahein raste mein khoo jaey jahaan mauqa nikul jaey jahaan sooret buney ghum ki jahaan bey raunaqi ka koyi bhi pehloo nikulta hai wahein kheema lagati hai UDAASI THAIHUR JAATI HAI |
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#33
02-17-2004, 03:57 AM
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bohot khoob.... "rahaAaj bhi shehar may pagal dil ko teri deed ki aas rahi Mudat ki gumm summ tanhai Aaj bhi meray paas rahi Aaj bhi shaam udaas rahi" bohot acha laga yeh qitta @};- Quote:
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#34
02-17-2004, 04:00 AM
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bohot khoob Huma....very nice mayri bhi fav ban gai ye nazm @};- bohot hi achi lagi 1.gif ")1") Quote:
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#35
02-17-2004, 04:03 AM
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bilkul sach kaha....udaasi thehr jati hai... bohot achi lagi @};- /yhug Quote:
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#36
02-17-2004, 04:23 AM
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kisi ko udaas dekh kar tumhein udaas sa pata hoon main kai din se na jaane kaun se sadme uthaa rahi ho tum woh shokhiyaan, woh tabassum, woh qah'qahe na rahe har ek cheez ko hasrat se dekhti ho tum chupa chupa ke khamoshi mein apni bechaini khud apne raaz ki taasheer ban gai ho tum meri umeed agar mit gai to mitne do umeed kyaa hai bas ek paas'o pesh hai kuch bhi nahi meri hayaat ki ghamgeenion kaa gham na karo gham hayaat'e gham yak naqs hai kuch bhi nahi tum apne husn ki raanaaion par raham karo wafaa faraib tul havas hai kuch bhi nahi mujhe tumhare taghaaful se kiun shikaayat ho meri fanaa mere ehsaas ka taqazaa hai main jaantaa hoon ke duniyaa kaa khauf hai tum ko mujhe khabar hai ye duniyaa ajeeb duniya hai yahaan hayaat ke parde mein maut chalti hai shikast saaz ki aawaaz mein ru naghmaa hai mujhe tumhaari judaai kaa koi ranj nahi mere khayaal ki duniyaa mein mere paas ho tum ye tum ne theek kaha hai tumhein milaa na karoon magar mujhe bataa do ki kiun udaas ho tum hafaa na ho meri jurrat'e takhtab par tumhein khabar hai meri zindagii ki aas ho tum mera to kuch bhi nahi hai main ro ke ji loongaa magar khudaa ke liye tum aseer'e gham na raho huaa hii kia jo zamaane ne tum ko cheen liya yahaan par kaun hua hai kisi kaa socho to mujhe qasam hai meri dukh bhari jawaani ki main khush hoon meri muhabbat ke phool thukara do main apnii roh ki har ek khushi mita loongaa magar tumhaari masarrat mitaa nahi saktaa main khud ko maut ke hathoon mein saunp saktaa hoon magar ye bar'e musaaib uthaa nahi saktaa tumhaare gham ke sivaa aur bhi to gham hain mujhe nijaat jin se main ek lahaza paa nahi saktaa ye unche unche makaanon ki devariyon ke tale har kaam pe bhooke bhikaariyon ki sadaa har ek ghar mein aflaas aur bhook ka shor har ek simt ye insaaniyat ki aah'o bukaa ye karkhaanon mein lohe ka shor'o gul jis mein hai dafn laakhon ghareebon ki roh kaa naghmaa ye shara'hoon pe rangeen saadiyon ki jhalak ye jhonpariyon mein ghareeboon ke be'kafan laashein ye maal road pe karoon ki rail pail kaa shor ye patriyon pe ghareeboon ke zard'ru bache gali gali mein bikte hue jawaan chehre haseen aankhon mein afsurdgi si chhai hui ye jang aur ye mere watan ke shokh jawaan kharidi jaati hain uth'ti jawaaniyaan jinki ye baat baat pe kanoon aur zabte ki giraft ye zeesq ye ghulaami ye daur'e majboori ye gham hain bahot meri zindagi mitaane ko udaas rah ke mere dil ko aur ranj na do
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#38
02-17-2004, 09:10 AM
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Zabardust, boohat khoob! SiP@};- Quote:
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#39
02-17-2004, 09:57 AM
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udass is qadar tha sooya na raat bhar ....... /aw2 palkoon say likh raha tha tera naam aasman per
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#40
02-18-2004, 07:18 AM
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Wow nice sharing Mahar /flower1
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